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Lord Shadow Eclipse


I'm just an author and supervillain wanting to tell stories and spread chaos and destruction. Ultra Evil Plus Chaos!

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Twilight has been princess of not only friendship, but all of Equestria for at least a year now. She had successfully united all creatures in the name of friendship and harmony. Things are very peaceful in the land.

However, one day, she gets a message explaining that diplomats from another nation are coming to visit them in the hopes of establishing friendly relations. One problem though: Twilight had never even heard of this country until now.

When the diplomats arrive, Twilight and the others aren't sure what to make of them. They're all foxes.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 31 )

They're all foxes.

Better that then the western ones

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Hope you enjoy the story so far.

This new story is strangely similar to a old story that also has Japanese-inspired Kitsune Foxes revealing themselves to Equestria.

Deja Vu much.

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I'm using it as inspiration. Don't worry. It won't be too similar.

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Can I please get a link?

11404907
I don’t remember, but I can look for it in my own bookshelves.

I'm so worried. I've only ran across like 10 fox, kitsune, or similar stories on this site and 100 percent of them have been utter garbage ( like Mary Sue x 10000, bad pacing, or in one case I just didn't like it but I'm sure it was ok. ).

Yours has a good start though so I'm rooting for you and looking forward to more.

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That's perhaps the greatest compliment this story has gotten so far.

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Yes! That's it! Thanks. It's sad that Crisis Northstar cancelled it.

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Agreed. I really loved where the story was going.

Why did you make them foxes and not fox yokai?

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They are fox yokai, or kitsune. They simply appear as foxes to the ponies. They haven't told the ponies that they refer to themselves as kitsune.

It's great to see you continue this story.

Comment posted by Anomimo deleted Jun 6th, 2023

Thanks for the chapters!
I must say, when I started your story I didn't exactly have high expectations, but you surprised me a lot. Now I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next, and I'm ready for more cute/romantic scenes with stroking kitsune tails.

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There will be more tail fluffing in the future, believe me.

They're all foxes.

Oh, like that's the weirdest thing Twilight has ever seen. Should be fun for sure. Kitsunes need more love on this site anyway.

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To be fair, she's never seen foxes like these.

I agree. Kitsune and other yokai need some love here. Looks like it's up to me to do so

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You're not the only user I know using kitsunes. Look up Valtyrian for some more.

awesome chapter mate:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Oh. I’m sorry, I should’ve noticed that from the title and synopsis. Will the big bad be based off of Tanamoe no Mae?

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Sadly, I don't who that is. Could you explain for me?

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The one from actual Japanese mythology or the one from the FATE series? Either way, no, the big bad in this story isn't Tamamo no Mae.

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Here you go. https://www.fimfiction.net/user/349484/Valtyrian Much easier than me trying to explain everything.

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