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Lord Shadow Eclipse


I'm just an author and supervillain wanting to tell stories and spread chaos and destruction. Ultra Evil Plus Chaos!

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Yes I can feel your anger do you want to kill them if you give use your dark side and you will become more powerful than any Pony.

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Yes! A true Sith Lord is in the house. Truth be told, I’d rather be a Sith than a Jedi.

it reminds me of german war crime keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

No amount of reparations, or kindness, laughter, generosity, honesty, loyalty, magic, nor apologies will ever bring back the dead. Fore the lonely vengeful heart will never forgive or forget the evils done unto them and their kind.

If you need an OC to borrow for this story, let me know via PM

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Especially since those that represents those virtues are ponies.

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That was surprisingly eloquent, my Saiyan.

I don't really get why there's so many downvotes. That was actually pretty good.

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I don’t know why, either. Maybe they’re uncultured swine.

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Likely there are downvotes because it's "painting ponies in a poor light and this is supposed to be My Little Pony." My response to the downvoters are... they haven't even reached Ponyville yet. Did you think all ponies were sunshine and rainbows just because OUR ponies are?

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That makes a lot of sense. It makes the other characters feel more like a true civilization and not some ever-positive land of sunshine.

Always thought it was odd that ponies "just happened" to find an completely uninhabited land to settle together. And how they seem to see some species in this verse, its no wonder they have so many enemies or "monsters" attacking them. And no amount of apologies from select few done in name of "Harmony" won't bring back the dead murdered in the name of the same "Harmony" by many seemingly getting away scot-free.

Keep it up.

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It never made any sense to me either that the entire land of Equestria was uninhabited by other sapient races before ponies arrived. I’m using this to explore that concept.

I really hope that their actions aren't approved by anyone and that they are poachers.

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Nice Star of Christmas reference.

I have only heard the term uncultured swine from there.

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I actually got it from the first "Toy Story" movie.

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I'm working on some new chapters right now.

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To quote Fluttershy: YAY

Poor Leatherfoot. I really hope that he won't be too harmed.

Too bad the Storm King didn't get them he probably would offer Revenge

This sounds just like Celestia in some stories where she comits complete genocide on the caribou because she doesn't like that they treat their females exactly how females are supposed to be treated.

It was a rectangular piece of wood with a small length of rope running through the top of it. On the piece of wood were those odd scribbles he saw on the sign on the front gate. The horned pony slipped the rope and wood around his neck. The new pony gave orders to his thugs to do something else.

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I got the inspiration for this scene from that movie. It’s really good.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

The travel continues. And hopefully he gets his vengeance in a way where slavers-blood flows...:pinkiecrazy: Also wondering how the "elite" and civilian in Equestria would take the news of their fellow ponies going around committing genocide? Know only partial "truth" or "out of sight our of mind"? Guess we'll find out eventually.

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Eventually. For now, I’m going to focus on how Leatherfoot’s life as a slave is going to be.

I hope that more is on the way.

Wouldn't there be other Gladiators for them to free and begin Step 1 secure the keys

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Well, they were only concerned with freeing themselves at the time.

One pony-b:yay:stard down (plus its crew/tumors)... So many more to go, and who knows how high in society. Potentially depending how much in the dark the rulers are about the true side of things, or do they actually support fully knowing about everything happening. Latter of which also having potential sides of plain "fantastic racism" or inaction caused by "out of sight, out of mind", both flooded with the blood of the innocent. All in the name of Harmony, as the ponies see it. Which also makes one think if some other species concept of harmony is vastly different from ponies view of it, and what would they do in reaction?

Keep up the writing:moustache:

Thanks for using Bluu in your story.

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I did it just for you, buddy! Thanks for the suggestion.

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Just let me know if you need another.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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It’s going to be one fun chapter!

Shouldn't he be 13 if he was 5 years old when he became enslaved then it has been 8 years?

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I’ll have to look back and make a change if I forgot how old he was at the beginning.

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I never read those before!!?? Which ones?

And by "complete" genocide? You mean even the females, the actual innocent males, and the children/babies that aren't corrupted or DON'T agree with King Dainn's sexism yet?

I thought this was dead. I thought he would become an urban legend living in the sewers of Manhattan for a while, killing ponies and bidding his time so the story really didn't go in the direction I thought it would.

However, him being caught by Twilight this early in the story feel a bit rushed.

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