The Last of the Crocfolk

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Bookeater_otaku

Bookeater_otaku #1 · Aug 30th, 2022 · 1 · ·

I thought this was dead. I thought he would become an urban legend living in the sewers of Manhattan for a while, killing ponies and bidding his time so the story really didn't go in the direction I thought it would.

However, him being caught by Twilight this early in the story feel a bit rushed.

Lord Shadow Eclipse

Lord Shadow Eclipse #2 · Aug 30th, 2022 · · ·

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I needed some way to get him and Twilight to come into contact with each other, but I couldn’t think of a way that satisfied me. I’m sorry I rushed it. I might go back and edit some of it.

J-90

J-90 #3 · Aug 30th, 2022 · 4 · ·

And now we wait what the Bearers think of ponies committing genocide, for no good or justifiable reason... 'Cause it sure wasn't for "hArMoNy and FrIeNdShIp" .