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Lord Shadow Eclipse


I'm just an author and supervillain wanting to tell stories and spread chaos and destruction. Ultra Evil Plus Chaos!

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awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Is this an MLP and rosario+vampire crossover?

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Thank you so much for the support! I’ll keep chapters coming out if you enjoy the story this much!

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It’s technically a crossover with “Rosario + Vampire” and “Welcome to Demon School, Iruma-kun!”. I’m including elements from both of these anime into this story.

If you need an OC, let me know.

ya know something you all. if grogar got to the poor girl first then he would of wiped her memory of the place clean and sent her home. but the dummy trixie ate the poor girl now the headmaster gorgar has to think of something on what happened to tell the family. if i was there i'd bust trixie's head hard for the stupid thing she'd done.

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My Saiyan, I thought of that, but there is a reason within the story as to why he didn’t try to save her. I’m not saying what it is. You’ll have wait and see for yourself.

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well i hope that poor girl gets out of this safely down the line. other wise things will not be pretty for trixie in her 'short' time in the story.

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I’ll let you know, my Saiyan! I might need one in future chapters. Plus, I plan on doing sequels of this story going by all of Spike’s high school years. From freshman to graduation! You excited? I’m excited.

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No spoilers as to the fate of the girl. Also, why did you put air quotes on “short”? I don’t get it.

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i have friends and connections with others that can 'go through walls'.
(a red and black spandex man with so many guns walks in) someone ordered a hit man? beacuse i'm the best at the wall game.
easy there deadpool. not yet.

Please tell me Trixie's gonna get what's coming to her.

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your not the only one on that dude.

Haven’t read the first chapter yet, but the summary has my interests. But due to not having a lot of time rn, mostly due to it being quarter to one in the morning where I am RN, so I’ll read this when I have the chance, and if I like it, it’s getting a Like, and if I like it enough, it’s going in my Fav’s folder.:pinkiehappy:

:ajbemused: still waiting on the girl dude. also on trixie's punishment.

Be patient! I’m trying to establish my characters and setting. I’m sorry, but the girl’s gonna have to wait a little longer. No pun intended.

She hard dark blue hair.

She has

Nice story though keep it up

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Sorry about that. I make grammar or spelling errors when I’m typing really fast. I’ll change that. Thank you so much for pointing it out.

I like this story. I'm mostly excited to see what Spike's reaction to the fact that Direwood Academy is full of monsters.

So this is similar to rosario vampire?

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It’s going to be something. Should have some of the students be in their true monster forms for Spike to see that they’re monsters or no?

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That's up to you. This is your story.

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If you would like me to keep and eye out for more spelling errors I can do that.

You have to make Luna a werewolf or people are going to be mad at you.

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I wasn’t planning to but, if I have to be a slave to the masses and keep my adoring public happy, then okay!

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How…okay? A fellow DBX2 Fan? And DB fan as well? Cause how could you know I main a Saiyan?

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I have no idea what you’re trying to communicate. There seems to be an issue with that. What are you trying to ask me?

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When I looked at what comment was sent to me it was,

Thanks, my Saiyan!

So if that’s the wrong comment, I’ll have to look again once I’m home from work, cause I’m on break rn and reading to kill time.😅

Firstly my condolences and second are we going to see some clichés?

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Saiyans were not a thing until DBZ

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I know that. That’s why I mentioned it. Tartarus, I prefer to main them in DBX1&2…but mostly for the obvious SSJ.:twilightblush:

Im sorry for the lost of your dog I know that feeling keep your head up.

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Great story with an interesting idea and crossover, I am looking forward to the next chapter, may I ask when it will be out and we will lean of the other students that failed the test to become the Guide-Light and what became of them?

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That depends, really. No spoilers. All I will say is Spike is going to revives both good and bad fortune.

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At some point, yes. I can’t reveal anything until the next chapter.

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Amy the Dog? I'm guessing with the adorable floppy ears a Shih Tzu?

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Not really. I mean, lots of dogs have floppy ears. Amy is based off my dog Maggie, who sadly passed away Monday. This was dedicated to her. She was a good dog.

Comment posted by Yaj-652-WOD-956-FAN deleted Mar 30th, 2022

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Thanks for the response.

May I ask what was your inspiration for choosing to make Trixie a snake monster?

If I may make a suggestion, if Cadence is in this story I think a good monster form for her would be a succubus, given her role in the show as the princess of love and by being a succubus it can create an interesting situation. What do you think?

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To answer your first question, I got the idea to make Trixie a snake monster (I'm going to give her species a name later) from the Snake Baron from the anime "Berserk" and the Naga of Hindu mythology. The Naga are kind and benevolent snake people.

To answer your second question, I just might make Cadence a succubus. Thank you so much for the suggestion.

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Glad I could help my friend.


Given that in most stories with monsters they either by way of something like a Full Moon or by instincts have difficulties controlling themselves, will something like that be part of the story?

Also given that it has been stated that monsters eat poeple, may I ask how far down that rabbit hole that idea will go, will some monsters be hunter and hunted?

Also nice opening chapter with good quality.

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To answer your first question, there will be a few factors that will make monsters lose control of themselves.

To answer your second question with no spoilers, there will be complications involving this topic further on in the series. Yes, I'm planning on turning this into a series.

And finally, thank you so much for all the support you've shown me.

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Looking forward to any squeals and the next chapter that come out.

I will be interested to see how lunch hours goes for Spike and how he deals with Trixie when he leans she is in part the reason for why he is at the school.

May I ask if Spike has any prior relationship will Twilight in this world given there dynamic in most other stories?

Also may I ask if there will be an explanation as to why the headmaster did not try and stop Trixie from eating another student & if her punishment will be shown?

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I can answer all of these easily: NO SPOILERS! You’re going to have to wait and see!

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Very well, I look forward to seeing your work and taking about it with others in the comments.

Keep up the great work.

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I will. I’ll probably have the next chapter out by tonight.

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Nice looking forward to it, I take it for the moment chapters will be out daily?

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