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ScarletRibbon
Just a pone who likes to write about other pones in compromising situations ranging from sexy to deadly and everywhere in between. https://ko-fi.com/scarletribbon
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Why is the accidental part of drug use spoilered out?
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I assume it's supposed to be a twist. Like you see drug use and you assume "oh Button does that of course" like Cream Heart does. Then boom, Flurry drugs herself like a dumbass. Similar to the other spoilered part, it's a twist that Flurry actually wanted Button's dick all along.
hah! That was a nice story :)
I would be totally curious how this would go on :D
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"I play reverse card! I counter your reverse with my reverse! I counter your counter with another reverse, plus four! Argh!!!"
Considering the circumstances, he got off like a Chad! 😂
Interesting ending!
And an odd twist.
That's fitting on so many levels. I can totally believe a filly her age would pick that as the name.
Two things to check:
*out of hoof
*hooves
And optionally:
*hoofed
I kinda want to see where this goes, if there's ever a sequel.
This was a nice little story!
Well... That is one way to get a marefriend 🤣
Okay, but I really like the sinister undertones regarding Flurry.
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Hmm hoofed really sounds ugly... probably better to use "passed"
Good story until the ending. The whole plan would quickly fall apart considering that in MLP world, they have paternity spells.
Better plan would be to just admit what happened, that Buttons hormones got the best of him (yes, it happens), and move on to damage control.
Needs a sequel.
I never really got into the foalcon debate. I don't really care one way or the other. I can see what is on the tin and I can choose to read it or not.
But you see a line like "9yo that secretly wants it" and you just do that look Doc Louis does when he sees Little Mac go up against Sandman for the first time...
DISCLAIMER: I didn't read it. Because I didn't read it... I cannot rate it. No, I didn't just slap a dislike on it for foalcon. No read, no rate. This is how it SHOULD work, you know?
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I can respect your disclaimer - it's how I generally approach things as well. I'm just confused why you felt the need to post this comment if it's not something you care about one way or the other. But I want to make an honest attempt at answering the unspoken question I'm reading between the lines in your comment. This might be slightly long-winded, and I apologize in advance.
Keep in mind, this was written for an event and I had to stick to the prompt (Flurry Heart, Button Mash, Somnophilia, preferably with drugs/pregnancy involved) I was given. I wanted to challenge myself, so when given the prompt, I decided I wanted to make this into a happy story. In the process, I think I succeeded in making it about as tasteful as possible, given the details.
I deliberately chose the ages in this story for a reason: 9 years old seemed like the youngest reasonable age for pregnancy. But this presented another problem: realistically, we don't know Button's actual age, but he appears to be the same age as the CMC in season 1, which makes him quite a bit older. I didn't want to write Button as a full adult due to the nature of the story--an adult doing what Button does here dramatically changes the nature of the story from 'stupid teenager making stupid choices' to 'adult pony who should know better rapes defenseless filly'. To avoid that, I stretched Button's age as far as I felt was reasonable, and as such, decided that an age gap of 6 years was the minimum possible gap that would be believable, and so I wrote that.
The desire to keep the story happy is also why I went out of my way to make all of the following were true:
A) Button isn't doing anything premeditated. Flurry accidentally drugs herself, and Button's actions are not initially sexual in nature.
B) There is a heavy emphasis on Button being stupid teenager who has a genuine curiosity and lack of self control in a compromising circumstance. I did not want him to be a predatory molester who is deliberately preying on a vulnerable filly.
C) Flurry comes away from the experience relatively unharmed, apart from being pregnant (as the prompt requested), because if any harm comes to her, it would invalidate my goal of a happy story.
The story also alludes to heavy consequences for Button's actions had Flurry not, herself, stepped in and interfered with the outcome, and he still has consequences. Nothing in the story is supposed to condone Button's actions, even if it might forgive them after-the-fact.
So, that's why I chose 9 as Flurry's age. As for why she would enjoy it or want it, I'm fully aware that someone at age 9 wanting sex is ridiculously rare outside of sexual abuse scenarios, but it can happen. I chose not to elaborate on that, because what was important was that she did want it, not why she wanted it.
The mare's name is Cream Heart.
(I stopped reading right soon after because these stories aren't my jam but that made me chuckle)
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There are two commonly accepted names for Button's mom, and that's one of them. It's literally the only reason this story works, too. I'm glad you at least took a short look.
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Ah ah ah, there you go combining fantasy to the real world. There is supposed to be a disconnect here, remember? Besides some rare case you may or may not know about does not make it common or even acceptable.
No, I commented because of how you can (and are supposed) to have that very disconnect I'm talking about. No matter how hard you try, you still read something like that and cringe even though this is about fictional ponies with non-existent sexual social structures. It isn't all created, so we substitute our own. I commented because I saw it and it had me doing it. You got me, in other words. Caught me lacking!
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I will never accept "Elaine" as one of those names. That one was weird and really breaks immersion.
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elaine is also the name of ambers lawyer
Me this whole story c.tenor.com/9LBVvWv0XwgAAAAC/confused-han-solo.gif
Cute story i'd love a sequel that shows them having a relationship and caring for their foal leading up to marriage and Flurry getting pregnant again with Button but this time they're both awake and aware of the act
This was the most wholesome non-con story I’ve ever seen
My only critique is the climax (literal) read like it was washed over, and considering its buttons first experience; I would've put more detail on the build up, then possibly holding back, flaring and flurry moaning because of it, before the big release. During release describing buttons rush of dopamine and endorphins.
Even coming back after reading it after the first time, I still read over that part and have to come back to it because theres just barely anything there to let you know it happened.
Everything leading up to it was great, and compared to that; the finish is definitely lacking.
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I mean, the whole thing is ruined by his mom walking in -- there's not supposed to be any time for him to bask in it. But I do get what you're saying.
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I have three separate sequel ideas right now and I might churn out one by the end of the month for Dezmo's contest. I'm undecided between doing that and another idea I have simmering.
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Ah. My impression was she yelled a moment or so after it happens. Great story overall.
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No sequel?
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Still might happen, but time will tell. I've learned that I can't promise things, cuz then I start to feel constrained by my promises and that kills my drive to write and then I just stop writing until particular inspiration hits.
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No pressure was just curious ☺️
But yes don't rush it, take your time 🙂
Hopefully you will find the inspiration ☺️
11446659
Well, good luck with writing
Is she implying that she should have taken care of Button's needs and that this wouldn't have happened if he hadn't been pent up?
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That was the insinuation, yes.
the reason is she's a filly in heat and he's a colt alone with a filly in heat
11446659
hope youre doing alright.
Hope a seqeul comes along
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Huh, I read that part completely wrong. I thought what Cream said had a much different, and darker, undertone. Cream meaning she should have taken care of Button's needs is definitely the better meaning.
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I hadn't even considered that interpretation, but wow, that would have been... different.
This is hot , I’d love a sequel to see what flurry had planned for in her bedroom