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Seems like a pretty cute and hot fic so far! Will defo be keeping watch

Welp with her heat gone shes gonna have to explain why her belly is beginning to grow in a few months to her parents :derpytongue2:

loving the story thus far!

Have to say, I burst out snickering when I saw the chapter title.

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Hmmm? At the end? Skeeedaddle is talking about Rumble there.

I don't see an issue with what Rumble is doing honestly. At least from the scene it seems that Rumble wants to genuinely help Kettle Corn and Skeaddle sounds jealous. I just hope Rumble is being a good colt and not trying to take advantage but mostly I hope Kettle Corn is okay. She's cute. Also her name, such an adorable name. Lil Kettle Corn.

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Well she is gonna be ok, tho shes likely gonna be pregnant by the end of this story lol

With Rumbles or Skeedaddles foal? only the author will know for sure lol, tho my money is on Skeedaddles as he was the one who got first.. well crack at her womb lol

This story is great! When can we expect the next chapter to be released?

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Next chapter should be some time in the next few weeks as soon I get a few things out of the way to continue writing.

Any updates on when the next chapter will be released?

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Um... this message ya sent was nearly going on 2 months now Sollace, everything ok?

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Yeah, sorry. Just been busy with some irl stuff so haven't been able to finish the chapter yet. I am still working on it, though! Promise!

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Hope everything is going well for you! When do you think you’ll have a chance to work on the next chapter?

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Thanks!

And I'm really sorry for the long wait. It will be a bit longer, but the chapter is mostly complete. There's just the last segment which I hope to do before Christmas.

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Any updates on when you think you’ll have the next chapter out?

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Was working on it last night. It is about 75% done and is looking like it will be a significantly longer chapter. Thanks everyone for being so patient!

i always found kettle is a cute filly

Poppy Seed gasped. Her eyes went wide as she glanced at Kettle Corn. “Wait,” she said, “you already know his name!?”

“Y-Yeah—”

“It’s perfect!” Her voice cracked the sweetie barrier as she practically turned into a dog whistle. “Now you have to fuck him!”

Ohhh, is that how that works? Guess I'd better go bang everyone I've ever met then.

When do you think you’ll have the next chapter out? And I also hope everything is going well for you.

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As is usual, things have been pretty busy on my side. More than usual recently. I have next week off so maybe then I'll have some progress to show.

Buck me, that was hot.

I WISH I could write something as sensual as that. Added a whole new section to my 'dictionary' document just from this chapter alone.

Also, I'm looking forward to the months down the line when... unforeseen consequences come around. Wonder how many she'll go with and who the daddy will be :rainbowwild:

How’s everything going with the next chapter?

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There will be a bit of a delay with the next chapter whilst I sort out some... issues.

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No worries! Your personal life takes definitely precedence over these!

Kettle Corn and Lemon Squeeze gasped and they both looked at the yellow and white filly that had appeared between them. Lemon Squeeze’s ears twitched and she blinked, then something clicked because she squeaked suddenly—“Oh, fuck!”—and she bolted out the door.

The same Lemon Squeeze who Sweetie was looking for and our three named fillies didn't know? Really not sure what's happening here.
Also saw a "kettle Corn" or two in there.

Kettle coon realised she’d been blushing herself

Slightly more unfortunate typo

“Oh yeah ,” Poppy Seed cut her off with a whisper, giving Kettle that same sly grin that she was quickly learning to regret. Poppy Seed immediately turned away from her and shot her hoof into the air shouting, “Oh, Miss Sweetie belle !

Some italics escaped with the closing quote

That should be enough to ensure he doesn’t go blabbing to his geldmates, at least.

Geldmates? As in geldings? Would be mighty unfortunate if all these colts were castrated...

Kettle lay back with her coat dap from the water.

Skeedaddle was sweating at this point and hat to bite his lip as he pulled back

I honestly wasn't expecting that kind of maturity; having Kettle almost breaking down completely instead of just lol horny ponies. This fic is definitely worth the effort it takes to note these typos when you're reading on mobile :raritywink:

—Kettle felt like he’d turned into a tomato—

Kettle’s hoof had gone back to wondering between her legs

Her was a pegasus with a light blue coat and a slicked back mane.

I also think most would consider Rumble to be more light-grey than light-blue

He put his hoof over her withers and to share in the warmth—as if she even needed it—

—Oh Luna, why couldn’t she have been left alone, just this one.

Despite the colt breeze she was starting to feel warm under the blanket

I'm sure a colt breeze would be making her even warmer :rainbowwild:

The wind picked up and as the boat slowly began to change direct,

Holding her face in her hooves—her rum was still burning

Cherry Pop pouted. Still clearly very damp and flustered, she buzzed her wings and pointed an accusing hoot at Poppy Seed beside her

It was Poppy Seed and Sweet Pop in the previous chapters, did someone get an accidental name change?

Hooves clamped around outside as ponies were climbing into bed

If anypony saw her listing her tail, that was their problem

What a spot for a cliffhanger :raritydespair:

she’d have to bit her lip to stop herself from making a peep, and then she’d lie there in wait, silently holding on, trembling as she tried not to move or let anypony on that she was awake.

The jitters would start up again and she bite her.

just scratching an ich, she told herself,

Not too late realising her mistake, she down on bit her lip.

clicking shut punder its own momentum.

his teeth tickling against the scruff of her neck as a hoof returning to rubbing her breasts.

Kettle could feel his heart punding in his chest

Rumble release his tension, his body softening against her as he rolled off of her.

She glanced against at the bank and then looked ahead,

thank Celestia was dark,

—his hooves trailing over her barrel before settling in over her breats—all the while his shaft pressed back betwene her thighs as Rumble pressed against her back

But was cut off suddenly when his grip rightened around her waist—

—his him pressing down on her hips,

Kettle Corn’s entire body tensed as a the first creeping trickles of her orgasm

, rumble leaned into her ear to speak again.

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Fixed! Thank you

It was Poppy Seed and Sweet Pop in the previous chapters, did someone get an accidental name change?

Indeed she did! Whoops!

That's what happens when you take long breaks between writing sessions.

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Fixed! Thank you

I also think most would consider Rumble to be more light-grey than light-blue

Changed! Yeah, it's a bit hard to for me to know. Me and my colour vision.

I'm sure a colt breeze would be making her even warmer :rainbowwild:

I'm sure it would :raritywink:

Holding her face in her hooves—her rum was still burning

Fillies and their rum, amiright?

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All fixed! Thank you

Geldmates? As in geldings? Would be mighty unfortunate if all these colts were castrated...

I assure you, they are quite fertile.

It's a sort of ponified slang term. Derived historically from geldlings, but in modern contexts it's just used to refer to a colt (or stallion)'s informal friend group or male classmates without being too nice about it. Also hinting at a little bit of gender role reversal, with how they're known to gossip among each other. :derpytongue2:

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Fixed! Thank you

Also saw a "kettle Corn" or two in there.

Surprisingly low, given my track record. Thanks! I spotted exactly 3 across the whole document.

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The same Lemon Squeeze who Sweetie was looking for and our three named fillies didn't know? Really not sure what's happening here.

Yes. The same Lemon Squeeze. I've rewritten the paragraph a bit to make it a little clearer what's happening.

Haha, gotta let them experience the cycle fully naturally before introducing coping methods, eh?

She stood no chance. The dice of destiny have spoken!

Kinda wondering if the CMC did this intentionally... 😈

And really, who makes oars that sink?!

I can't believe it's been a year now since last update

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