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Might be obvious from the pic and description, but you might wanna add to said description that Foalcon is in the story. Some people have rather strong opinions about it.
I'm positive about it myself, ESPECIALLY when there's some Mare on Filly action. Since its status is incomplete, does that mean there's more to come? Please say yes.
Either way, love the story. Hope for more!
Edit: Might also wanna mention that Pumpkin and Pound are aged up from their show!selves. Otherwise people might think it's even WORSE than Foalcon.
I must agree with this story... but not everyone likes underage sex... and foalcon is number 3 of illegal in real life. Writing foalcon isn't illegal... so, this fiction is pretty good. I mean Princess Celestia did say it's good to be young. 0_0
I think that this is the best one I seen so far of a foalcon fiction. I'm excited to see more chapters.
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there definitely is more to come, just have to find time to get more ideas of how to continue it
11359473 She also said that there is no wrong way to fantasize.
ok, I got like 3 paragraphs in and had to stop. You really should have run this by an editor or something, or at least put forth SOME sort of effort to use proper punctuation. There are so many run-on sentences, it's just exhausting and distracting to read
Needs a editor but its pretty good
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thanks for your input! I’ll definitely be looking for someone to edit from now on
Continue please