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well looks like its time for ponies to awakening to their hidden fetish for being photographed.
Its an actual fetish, just forgot the name of it.

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Something more specific than exhibitionism, I assume?

Oh, you misspelled "camera" in the short description.

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Oh, nice. Thanks for pointing that out!

very good start im interested where this is going ^^

Cover art...
Everyone has normal eyes except, Scootaloo, who only has two lines for eyes.:rainbowlaugh:

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Oh wow. I hadn't noticed that XD

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hey, at least we can teach the children of today how to draw eyes in one second for the future when their never need it!

20 Year Later Youtube
Okay, class today were drawing eyes. Watch carefully.
Draws two lines
Class is over your homework is to make eyes with witchPony magic.

you've only fucked up if they catch you, reckless bravado can do wonders to un-fuck your situation.

reckless bravado: They were in a lust daze post-coitus , no way they got a good look at you. If you can escape the scene just plead innocence if they go looking for you and ditch the camera which is the only evidence. Even blame Featherweight the only other pony with a camera.

well mistakes were made, but looks like no one needed to get the authorities involved.

10239547
"I won't tell if you won't tell"?

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on a completely unrelated note, did he get the lens cap back.

awesome chapter, that guy is just a bundle of nerves xD
sooner ore later he will get himself in real trouble ^^
tho nether i could figure something out how to get that lencecap back without a zene

‘New Toys’, Eh?

Methinks that Anon isn’t the only one to appreciate the filly form...:rainbowwild:

i bet he will give the wrong envelope to fluttershy xD

10246712
Oh, you don't know the half of it :pinkiecrazy:

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Oh, now that would be an interesting scenario, wouldn't it?

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It's a relief to hear it wasn't an unmitigatedly disaster!

I don't mind the shipping at all. Also I'm honestly wondering if he's dense and literally took pictures of flowers, or if he's taking pictures of what I think.

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I think he took pics of flowers for fluttershy, and the other thing for himself. But doesn't realize fluttershy probably also means the other thing.

It's not pedofillia it ephebafillia, wait shes? Then I guess it is pedophillia

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. The scenes with Dinky uh playing with herself were well written and captured the embarrassment of first time pleasure really well!

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Thank you! I aims to please. :twilightsmile:

oh buck your luck runs out xD

The Protagonist is as dense as any harem protagonist it seems. Not that it is a bad thing for now. :pinkiesmile:

Also in this Universe, the mares and fillies seem to be huge closet perverts. Either that or the Author is trolling us. Though Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have shown clear perversion, so I like to believe that all the remarks and talks are meant perverted.

Huh, nicely done! Wish I had gotten to this sooner

nice to see this updated, worth the wait!

She shook her head and signed. “It doesn’t work. Nopony listens to us. Everypony thinks they’re the ‘most perfect little angels’, and as far as Scootaloo and their friends are concerned, Diamond and Silver were reformed months ago when the three of them got their cutie marks.

ooohh now thats a plottwist:twistnerd:

poor Dinky...But loved the chapter and how you made her

I was almost dying at as it was.

and I head heard the filly moan,

any signs of flight fright.

There's actually quite a lot of errors, including numb3r5 in the text.

It might be a good idea to proof read these, I will try to do it as I read it out loud. For the recording.

I'll upload these 2 chapters this week. Then will be reading another fic next week.
Hope you can do some proof reading in the meantime. Your writing can be a difficult to follow sometimes, with the grammar being a bit odd.

I like where this is going :) and am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.

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Yeah, sorry. I did go through this and had editors look at it too but some things still slip through the cracks, especially on longer chapters. If you send me the errors by DM I'll be sure to fix them. :twilightsmile:

Edit: I did a quick check and did not find any numbers. There were pipes, though, which I have removed.

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I usually read half a chapter to get the vibe of it before turning the microphone on. So I'm usually stumbling on these mistakes live during recording. It's a method I use to save time. But okay, your editors miss a lot, unfortunately.

Ah, thank you this was much easier to read.

It's recorded and will be out Monday morning. Could work a bit more on a nice soundscape since it's short and sweet. :)

I'm a bit confused, is the human suddenly a pegasus now?

Ah, silly me for commenting before reading it all.

Great chapter :)

My haphazard stumble turned into a steadier walk. I was finally able to loosen the grip on my camera when I heard the hoofsteps fall away behind me, and I breathed a much-needed sigh of relief. My heart was racing and my face felt flush with exertion, but at least I wasn’t dead yet.

You're the only human in the world for the ponies of course they know it was you.

Oh my god when he actually started taking pictures of the flowers I just about lost it. Yeah, I can definitely see why the description mentioned him being oblivious.

Please tell me this fic is still in progress...

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