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Wat? I'm thinking a 90% chance you're a bot. I don't think I've seen a bot on fimfic before.
11032394
It is definitely a bot. No clue what it's trying to do, but I've already reported it so best to just ignore it until site staff can do something.
Nice story! Can't wait for more!
Also, nice profile pic!
11032447
Thank you! And thank you! More chapters are undoubtedly on the way.
Praise be unto the golly
"Once again"
I'm sorry, what? Again?!
What happened the first time? I want to read that story first!
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First time was in the show, lol
11032487
Makes sense now. There wasn't anything to indicate otherwise, heh. Perhaps adding something in the description how this story builds off of that episode? You don't have to, but that is just me being nitpicky
11032493
Yeah, I was thinking I should anyway.
"Woah, Sweetie! Did you eat a super mushroom?"
*sigh* "Yes, Button. I ate a super mushroom."
edit. Would downvoters prefer "Ara, ara, Button-Kun! Talking about eating mushrooms? Such a naughty colt!"
Alright, not a bad starting chapter.
Do we find out why or how Sweetie got so big?
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Oh yes, we will. Maybe not now, but eventually it will all make sense.
Welp, She bucked up.
I'm confused. What's the tea thing about?
11050075
A special type of birth control in the MLP universe. Granted, if you haven't been reading any of Clipficsinthecomments' Apogee fics, you might have encountered it.
It's not given much spitlight because, of course, Sweetie wouldn't know anything about that kindnof stuff.
Nice work, I quite enjoyed the read.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Don't let the door hit you in the ass on your way in
This needs a couple of sequels, one of older sweeties perspective of being trapped in the past, then an actual sequel continuing this story. Its a really interesting concept.
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Shhhhhhhh Spoilers.
It was excellent how you took it slow and took time to describe everything. And Sweetie Belle’s foal-like innocence played well. You never forgot that she was just a filly.
I was a little unclear about their position when they first had sex, though. Also, he seems to have pulled out twice at the very end.
The main thing, though is that the mystery of what kind of magic did this to her was never really revealed. Left me pretty confused. So… It was all a dream? Or was it? And who or what caused this to happen? Did she get her future self pregnant?
Still, though, a lot of the scenes were really hot. I particularly liked the emphasis on his cock rubbing against her belly and teats. Overall, a somewhat confusing, but very enjoyable story.