Clop writer with too much on their plate. Trying to level up. PM friendly ^^
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You can’t just make a sequel when the prequel isn’t finished
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I had it lying around mostly written, so I finished it off first >.<
Lol this is like the ultimate example of clop writers never finishing a story.
maybe if enough people like this story he might be inspired to finish his original story, then gain this is me being optimistic.
That almost turned cute at the end, until I remembered the circumstances! Good story so far!
Lol. The fat, sweaty human strikes again. My only gripe is that the pacing is a bit off.
I love your writing. It's so easy and laid-back. And the colored dialog! Keep doing that!
(^_^)v
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What would you change about the pacing? Do you mean the balance of setup to payoff, or something else?
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Something to that effect. I can only give my gut feeling, which I have developed through reading literal butloads of pony porn. Σ(゚Д゚)
Do you plan of make another sequel like this?
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No plans for extra sequels at the moment. I still have to finish the mainline story! ><
Always happy to talk ideas with people, though.
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Yeah, but as the main line seems to not be working for a long time, maybe you could have other ideas like try with the crusaders or other fillies. Maybe learn hypnotism or use some brainwashing video and show it in Cherilee class
I have to say this was brilliant.
Are you going to continue updating with the main story or make more sequels with others fillies or the same?