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Flutterpriest


I wrote hoers (Ko-Fi/Patreon)

Comments ( 22 )

JAXIE’S speedwriting contest?

This unironically gave me a semi.

Someone help.

Whoa! Buttoncest!? Can't let this stay in usersub!

[Edit] A sequel to this just got added to my To-Do list.

9998825
One of us. One of us.

This made me feel legit uncomfortable. Good job.

Damn I was just thinking about writing a buttoncest story (albeit with a different plot). I don't want it to look like I'm copying anybody, but I suppose we can't have too much buttoncest now, can we?

This story was really short but not bad for the length. I would love to see it continued.

You had me a self destructive selflessness.
Well done.

the small droplets of clear fluid absorbing into his Cheerliee-O’s.

What is the fluid supposed to be? Drool?

9999412
I'm guessing tears of shame.

He went downstairs, grabbed a bowl. A box of Cheerilee-O’s and their bag of milk from the fridge before sitting down at the table.

The story was great, until you crossed this line.

even if not for perverted reasons i'd still snuggle that ball pf fluff

9999602
Truly, a most grievous crime.

Good ol Carolina Counselin!

Comment posted by kodak deleted Dec 23rd, 2019

9999602
Lol,

Nothing wrong with milk in bags. Just not American. Really no different than bagged/boxed wines.

You know, the high quality stuff

The Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze

Wouldn't she notice that Button was crying? Does she know it wasn't just a dream?
Whew, what an emotional powder keg.

Comment posted by Azure Magician deleted Dec 31st, 2019

This story certainly packs a punch when it comes to emotons. Thumbs up for that. Liked the ending.

Stil, the text could use a lot more love and work. Sometimes word choices seem too clunky not to notice.

She’d probably upset

'be' is missing.

Button felt his breath hitch in his throat. This doesn’t feel right.

Is it just me, or this jump between tenses is illegal? Or the second sentence supposed to be Button's thoughts?

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