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This explores a pretty unique dynamic with some good depth. It's great to get a full view into her head as these wrong things take place, and we see how Wind Sprint has been changed by them already.
Well done!
I know you meant male/female, but I keep reading it as "Incest, motherfucker" in Samuel L. Jackson's voice.
Very deep thought along with the horny, I appreciate it !
Makes me wonder…was her dad caught and arrested, did he die, or did her parents split up for unrelated reasons?
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It's been awhile since I watched her episode, but as I remember the issue of what actually happened to her father was left purposely vague. I think I kind of prefer leaving it similarly ambiguous in my version. I kind of wonder about it myself, though.
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
11710113 Based on the dialogue, I'd say her dad died before Quibble came into the picture.
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In the show, I assumed the idea was to imply that he had died, without actually saying it out loud since it was a kid's show. I know the episode was also based on Patton Oswalt's wife dying irl, so that would also support this interpretation. My general rule of thumb though is that if it's not explicitly stated it's not canon
11710149 The exact same thing that I thought too.
Playing Devils' Advocate here, Quibble is being a complete idiot. I don't believe in committing crimes, but I'm a firm believer in "if you're going to do something, do it RIGHT." Given Wind Sprint's attitude towards him, he had no expectation of her silence, so the risk/reward ratio was simply too high. It was a stupid thing to do, but I suppose when one is an addict, one doesn't think rationally. This is pure fantasy, so no one is being hurt, but I can't help but consider the real-world situations where such things actually occur. The filly's defeated attitude is telling as well. This was something she'd grown used to from her own father, so she wasn't repulsed by the act, she was repulsed by the person.
That's...sad...
Don't worry Wind. He'll just keep visiting you every night and over time, he'll get better and your relationship we'll grow. Thus, eventually he'll no longer will be a wuss and treat you right and you will grow to love him.
Just give it time.
That was a sad fap
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Hmm...no. She's strikes me as the kind of filly that would take matters into her own hooves:
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This also occurred to me. My thinking is that Quibble somehow figured out what had been going on between Wind and her Dad and decided to try his luck one night. It was definitely a stupid and risky thing to do, but then impulsive sex-based decisions usually are.
One possibility along the lines of what Playbrony suggested is that, if Wind's dad is gone because he's in jail, then Quibble would have come into the relationship already knowing what went on. In that situation, we can assume Clear Sky probably started dating Quibble because he seemed harmless and wussy. Little did she know that he was into that sort of thing as well.
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I also like this idea.
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You know what, You're absolutely right. I can totally see her doing that.
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I like to believe that he the birth father died. I got that feeling in the episode when both Wind and her Mom spoke about him.
I also think it's better to say that Wind is just so irresistible, that there are many stallions and mares wanting to fuck her but so far only her dad and stepdad had crossed that line. It's still possible for other adults she knows to try and get her alone and rape her lovingly.
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A lot of these comments I've received have gotten my noggin joggin lol. I might end up writing some more Wind Sprint stories in the same continuity as this story.
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Please do
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Perhaps Pear Butter and Bright Mac are actually out there somewhere after abandoning their children and the farm the way Pear Butter's dad did to her...
For those who want to see the full version of the cover pic (or rather, the animation that seems to be the closest I can find to a still frame), check out 2257569 on Derpi.
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That is indeed the image. I grabbed a single frame and played with the lighting a little so it would look like an image taken in a dark room. So the coloring in the original animation will look slightly different from what you see here.