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This story is a sequel to Set In Stone
I don't know how long it's been. I just know one thing: I'm not alone in this stony prison. No, I'm not talking about Chrysalis and Tirek.
She speaks of me.
It made me relive my life countless times; it made me relive my greatest failure.
Why?
To get you where you are now, Cozy Glow.
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Won't lie, I do enjoy an evil Cozy Glow from time to time.
I want more of this so bad! Great work!
I feel like you meant It made me relive my life..." instead of "It made me relieve my life..." in the long description
Is this a time loop? But this time, Cozy and her two villainess "friends" won, because Cozy DIDN'T hold back to kill them this time to have a permanent victory.
And what's with the alternate personality? Is that Daybreaker somehow possessing her? And use some type of time magic to reset the original finale, and turn it more in favor of Cozy and the two villians?
I remember in the finale Cozy did say “it’s time for your complete destruction” so I don’t think she has reservations about killing. But the thing I like about MLP villains is that they try to emotionally break the heroes, which is worse than killing if you think about it. To quote one of my favorite fics “There’s nothing more boring than a corpse”
So what is she? That's the question.
Pretty good pacing and the emotional bits pay off pretty well all things considered.
If you pick it up again, it will be interesting to see where you take it from here.
Def has som serious vibes from this song
also
damm Cozy if only you did that the first time
~Reggie
The way that Cosy Glow finds the TRUE answer for the problem was awesome. The villains in the show try to break the heroes emotionally and mentally because it’s MUCH more painful than a torturous death. But with friends they almost always can get back up, but not this time. This time there luck has ran out, and the blood has been spilled.