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Phantom-Dragon


An Asian-American brony who is a fan of Spike, Discord, and Jackie Chan.

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Spike was just your average, run of the mill, regular kind of baby dragon, who is Twilight's Number One assistant.

That all changed, however, when he got involved in secret agent works with a retired guard and a background pony. Now, he's doing secret agent stuff.

He's a S.M.I.L.E. Dragon.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 23 )

I loved it. Very sweet tale of Spike, Fleur, and Bonbon. And gives us another legit excuse why Spike wasn't at Twilight's party rather than just making it look like the girls left him behind.

I love this take with Spike as S.M.I.L.E agent (not to mention explaining his absence at Sweet & Elite ep:raritywink:) Course now I wonder how things will go when he & Thorax meet up later though. :applejackunsure:

Thanks for the tale! :moustache:

I must say this is very impressive story you made PD. The chemistry between spike fleur and bonbon was very entertaining and I'll be glad to read this again

I think in the beginning of your story it kinda repeat again just give you a little heads-up

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Oh oops! My bad. Thanks for pointing it out.

I’ve just fixed it!

The bug-pony was blasting a fiery barrage of green magic fireballs at Fleur and Bon Bon. But with quick reacting, Fleur de Lis focused her magic to conjure up magic barriers that blocked some of the magic fireballs. During which, Bon Bon flanked the horsefly creature, trying to get the jump on it. The earth mare lunged forward and tackled the horsefly creature into the ground.

That kind of reminds me of the story about Fleur de Lis secret life

"I'm a dragon! Dragon!" Spike frowned. "I don't do that tongue thing."

Nice reference to Mulan

"AH!" The horsefly creatures shouted. "So bright! Don't look at the light! I can't help it. It's so beautiful!"

A Bug's Life reference love it

"Anyway, I've been tracking those changelings' activities for moons now," Sweetie Drops continued. "But as of late, they're becoming more organized and coordinated. They're getting more bolder and if we're not careful, all of Canterlot will be overrun by these things."

Yeah Bonbon about that...

Well this is a very interesting story and this is actually pretty cool how are you put two things together especially bonbon as a special agent and that fancomic a fleur de lis as a formal royal guard was a pretty interesting concept together and Spike witnessing all this is happening with those two facing those changelings and I wonder if thorax was there but anyway this was a pretty interesting one keep up the good work

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No problem by the way you've been getting a lot of dislikes and the people who make comments been getting a lot of dislikes is there a reason why

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No idea. Whoever's been giving us the troubles has a grocery list of all kinds of motives.

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Hmm ok I guess but still it's kind of harsh to give somebody like that without any reason

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Yeah. They either hate us because they're jealous, or they just hate us just because. Either way, I'm not paying them any mind.

"What is that?!" One of the horsefly asked. "A lizard?"

"I'm a dragon! Dragon!" Spike frowned. "I don't do that tongue thing."

Anyway, this seems like it could be interesting. I've toyed with the idea of a Secret Agent Spike tale a couple of times myself in the past but never committed to it, so I'm game to see another author tackle the idea. :twilightsmile:

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And I won't either

This turned out to be quite a fun read courtesy of giving Spike his own little adventure with two fan favorites as far as background characters are concerned. If this were a series, I'd totally follow this.

Can I find out if there will be a sequel, or is it such a mini story?

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I hope things get better with the dislikes, nobody should be rapidly disliked for no reason..

This was a pretty nice story and not the first story I've read where Fleur is an agent of SMILE.

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