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Phantom-Dragon


An Asian-American brony who is a fan of Spike, Discord, and Jackie Chan.

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An abridged version of the original The Fighting Dragon fanfic.

Once upon a time, a young dragon named Spike fell out of the sky and crash landed in a world called Foenum.

Spike meets and befriends Arizona, the cow. Together, they meet and befriended other fighters, working together to save Foenum from the Predators and send Spike back home.

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Comments ( 5 )

Thanks very much for getting this shortened version of the story up. The dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up seem to be well done thus far. Definitely liked the picking up at Arizona's first meeting with Spike when the former was training to fight Predators.

As I said before, it would probably be better to just make the main version of this story a full-on AU anyway, so you have more freedom to do the main story your way as opposed to being dependent on the actual game's story mode. Even more freedom for Spike to make the realization that the Champions would have a better chance completing the mission by working together instead of competing. More freedom for the Champions to actually learn to work as a team. More freedom for extra scenes to prominently include the DLCs.

But, yeah, definitely looking forward to more of this.

I'm curious, why is an abridged version being created? For new readers?

Can't to see what happens :)

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Para responder su pregunta mr, AllenVth, la anterior versión no supo como aprovechar algunas de las interacciones de algunos personajes como Spike y velvet su interacción no tuvo mucho impacto entre sí, teniendo Velvet algunos rasgos de comportamiento de elegante pretencioso como Rarity, pero más como un reflejo de un extremo negativo de lo que hubiera sido Rarity sin sus amigas.

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