This story is a sequel to Date Night: Home Cooking

The time for Hitch's and Sunny's third date has come, and as Maretime Bay's sheriff comes to the lighthouse for dinner, Sunny wonders if it's time to take the next step in their blossoming relationship. Are they ready?

Cover image by chub-wub@derpibooru

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The big question have been dropped. Now, to see the answer to it :coolphoto:

Nicely done, looking forward to see the next part

So it looks like they're having a little third date with each other and I had to admit some of the food sounds pretty good and it's so cute to see hitch and sunny together and Sunny actually asked a question and I wonder what hitch is answer I guess we'll find out next time

This is starting look good already.

Goodness gracious man, the whole build-up of previous stories to this one is such a pleasant feeling like no other! Absolutely glorious stuff and I can't wait to see what's to come! Just everything about it is so GOOD! Hope ya didn't mind, but I just couldn't say no to making a reading of the first part (and hopefully more in the future)!

Audio Link!: https://youtu.be/QfAKOfuFhn0

Ah, sweet, sweet romantic slices of pizza life. It's always nice to sit and just see chill stories. :twilightsmile:

"You know, if you really want to get technical, that really wasn't a pizza. It was a casserole."

Taking a jab at Chicago, eh? :rainbowlaugh:

Like he's gonna say no? Come on. :trollestia:

I mean, I can see a (joke) ending where this just happen. But well, it'll (very very) probably be a yes, and that would bring some great sap, and I dig good sappy stuff ^^

Sometime later...
Hitch is lying on his back, possibly with numerous broken bones, wondering where the HELL the train that just ran him over came from. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This is extremely sweet! my heart! AHHHH I melt with cuteness!! :heart:I was looking forward with all my heart to see the next part! You make the most romantic and sweet stories without a doubt, I long to see the continuation!:raritystarry:

I’m looking forward to a story with these two getting more than one chapter 😊 In it for the long haul!

Lovely start to this story. Can't wait to see where it goes. :pinkiesmile:

I have to say, the two prequels to this don’t really feel like they need the T rating

Well it looks like they were prepared to go to sleep and she looks like she was ready for something but hitch felt like he's not ready or felt like he deserve it after what happened from the previous movie but Sunny never hold it against him sometimes you just have to wait until they felt comfortable this was a pretty sweet story keep up the good work

I'll say it again, because it can't be said enough: Hitch is best pony. :heart:

I'm not gay. I'm 100% straight. That percentage drops to about 64% whenever Hitch is involved.

Well, I stand (partially) corrected. Good on ya, Hitch.

My thoughts about Hitch

Before seeing the movie: Eh, Hitch looks like another Spike. A typical idiot male character who's there to be the butt of jokes, get ragged on constantly, and be a total wimp who can't stand up to Sunny. He'll just be there to make everyone else look better.

After seeing the movie: Quietly jumps into the screen, scoops up Hitch, and walks away. This is mine now.

3 things Hitch will fight to the death to protect

1. His friends (Especially Sunny)
2. The citizens of Maretime Bay.
3. His virginity. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

See ? Told ya, we can never be 100% sure of something. And that's a good thing for stories to have :coolphoto:

I've had Hitch for about a day and a half. But if anything happened to him, I would kill everyone in this fandom and then myself.

and that was when the two of the even got something that could be considered a weekend.

You forgot the M at the end of the second ‘the.’

"I remember you said when you wanted to do your part, and you did.

You probably don’t need to add ‘What,’ between ‘remember,’ and ‘you,’ but I can’t help but think one ought to be there. I’m probably just used to it being said that way, though.

Sunny reached over the shut the light off, before she snuggled in close and kissed him on the snout.

That first ‘the’ should be a ‘to.’

Cute story, I like the direction you took with Hitch thinking that he doesn’t deserve to be this close to Sunny, after how she treated her during the events of the movie; that’s an understandable concern. Sunny and Hitch deserve to take their time, and let their relationship build up naturally.

Cute story, the way you portray Sunny and Hitch + their relationship is really sweet. Good work!

During the movie, after he tells Sunny off for her stunt at the Canterlogic factory: Wow, okay... He's definitely not another Spike. He really should have handled that better. He shouldn't have told her that those stories of pony unity were made up by her dad. That was out of line.

Still, props to him for having some backbone.

Short, cute, and realistic, Love it!

Brother I really love this kind of readings where the guy gives himself the importance of thinking and taking care of his girl with that delicacy and with the right words, although I would really like to see a chapter where they can take the next step and give themselves...and taking into account how romantic and sweet you write I'm sure it will be great! I look forward to continue with this reading!:heart:

Well, I've certainly thought about it, but a chapter like that cannot be in the same story, as it would undoubtedly be rated Mature.

Comment posted by Ice Cr3am deleted Feb 22nd, 2022

You are right, you can consider it, also as you have delicacy to write therefore it would be a beautiful chapter,:raritystarry: I hope you consider it I would love to read it you can put a similar title and have it classified in mature, it is just a suggestion because if it would be beatiful (3

I've been considering it since even before making this story. But writing-wise, I've got quite a bit on my plate and back burners, so it will likely be some time. Thanks for the suggestions, though.

I understand about the time I know there are many occupations but if that's what it's about I wouldn't mind waiting, you're welcome and thanks for answering <3

Maretime Bay was getting more visitors than ever, so that meant more patrols by the MBPD to keep the streets safe, and especially clean. Sunny kept herself just as busy with smoothie sales. When locals and tourists alike wanted a smoothie made by the 'Reunifier of Equestria', it wasn't often when Sunshine and Smoothies didn't have a line down the boardwalk. When they ran out of their weekly supplies in two days, they had to make an emergency run down to the wholesale grocer, and then proceeded to double the size of their next supply order, and even that barely made it through the next week as tourism only increased.

And will for quite some time. Hope they'll be able to handle it. :unsuresweetie:

Twenty minutes later, just as he was getting into the nature documentary on the screen, over came Sunny, with a large baking sheet which she slid onto the coffee table. On the right side of the sheet were six freshly baked garlic breadsticks, and the main event was clearly the two-inch cast iron pan, in which rested a deep dish pizza.


"One of my favorites from our big eat-out nights downtown, and I've been reading up on how to do it myself here. It's stuffed full of veggies, and we have to let it rest for about five minutes, so the breadsticks are to start us off," Sunny replied, going to go get a couple plates, a knife, and spatula. A third trip back to the kitchen yielded two tall glasses and a bottle of red wine, which she quickly poured, then sliding a glass over to Hitch.

Did ponies ever drink wine in mlp? I'm pretty sure they never did from what I've seen. 🤔

"You know, if you really want to get technical, that really wasn't a pizza. It was a casserole," Hitch commented, getting a chuckle out of his marefriend. Without a doubt, both of them felt like they had eaten too much, but that thing was entirely too good to be subjected to reheating of any kind.

Of course he'd say that. :ajsmug:

"I'd like that," Hitch replied, managing to smile again. Sunny pulled back the comforter, climbed into bed and slid over to the far side to make room for Hitch. He slid in under the covers, and got comfortable. Sunny reached over to shut the light off, before she snuggled in close and kissed him on the snout.

A happy ending to a great story. And despite it's not 100% canon atm, I still ship Sunny & Hitch 100%! :twilightsmile:

I really love this kind of reading. I really like the way you write so sweetly and romantic, I can't stop reading it duck life I reread it at least 3 times

Thanks for reading, and re-reading!

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