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I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.

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School has ended and Sunny invites Hitch to come over to play for the evening. Sunny tells Hitch about her dream of unicorns and pegasi being welcomed with open hooves in Maretime Bay. Together, Hitch helps Sunny pretend to fly whilst she dreams of that fantasy becoming a reality.

Inspired by the fanart and animation Support
By artist LiaAqila

First G5 fanfic. Hope you enjoy this cute one-off

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Awww😍This was just adorable. Thank you for another cute little story:twilightsmile:

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Thank you for your compliment ^^

“Well if there was a unicorn or pegasus in Maretime Bay, we will be ready for them!” Sprout puffed his chest out and smiled proudly, “Mum always says that to be scared is to prepared! She already has her next line of protection gear ready for the next show.”

Just wait until a certain unicorn comes in in the future Everything Will Change

Aww this is a pretty cute story and it's always sweet to see sunny and hitch how much their friendship is so much to each other I'm just surprised that Sprouts hangs out with her but I think he only hangs out with hitch but he always wants to be with sunny wow but anyway this was a very cute story and yes Sunny's dream will come true in the future keep up the good work

Heehee cute.

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Thank you very much ^^

This is really cute, showing Sunny and Hitch's friendship as kids. It took Hitch awhile, but he eventually helped Sunny just like he said he would here.

Such a cute little story between friends. :rainbowkiss:

Me before seeing the movie: Meh, Hitch looks like your typical idiot male character you see everywhere these days. He's going to be the butt of jokes, and just thrown in to make everyone else look better. He'll probably worship Sunny and be a completely spineless simp for her, like Spike with Rarity.
Me after seeing the movie: Casually jumps into the screen, scoops up Hitch, and walks away This is mine now.

Hitch is best pony.

The picture hanging next to the door picturing Sunny with her dad, Argyle, became titled, but that was quickly fixed with Sunny readjusting it.

Won't be the last time this happens.

“Where did you get those?” Hitch’s eyes widened, “If ponies saw you running around Maretime Bay with those things on, it will cause a mass panic!”

If you are lucky.
If you are unlucky you will end up with an angry mob...

“Yes!” Sunny shouted out loud, “Princess Sunny Starscout! Reuniter of the three tribes, restoring friendship across the land!”

Sounds ambitious! But should it work out the reward would be great.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.


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Hitch is best pony.

Your thoughts on that one?

Before reading: I wonder if they were specifically playing out the historical story of how Shining Armor and Cadance collected the falling Crystal Heart and Spike? A soldier/law-stallion and his princess.

After: Sweet, but draws a bit too much of its spoken lines and dreams for the future very directly from the movie.

P.S. To aspiring writers: This would be expected and usually even required when repeating (with or without modifications) the specific scenes from the original work(s).

“Unicorns always use their horns to fry your brains! That’s what we were taught at school, Sunny! And school never lies!”

Well your does. :twilightangry2:

Sunny went along with the games and mock demonstrations because was taught to her by the school. However, that didn’t mean she wanted to believe that all pony races are enemies. She believed that one day, just for one day, earth ponies, pegasi and unicorns can come together. She believed that pegasi weren’t going to swoop down and ambush them. She hoped that unicorns didn’t shoot lasers out of their horns or can read minds. She just put on a fake smile and laugh and went along with the classrooms charades.

They can shoot stuff from their horns but can't read minds. :duck:

“Well if there was a unicorn or pegasus in Maretime Bay, we will be ready for them!” Sprout puffed his chest out and smiled proudly, “Mum always says that to be scared is to prepared! She already has her next line of protection gear ready for the next show.”

You won't need protection! 😡

“Urgh! There’s no point arguing with you, isn’t there?” Sprout huffed in annoyance, “You’ll want us to play your cute silly games about friendship and trust. Well, I don’t have time for that.” Sprout turned around in the opposite direction and trotted away from the two ponies. “I’m off to do my homework on why pegasi nets are a useful tool.”

Jerkface. 😒

“One day, just for one day, I will show every pony that all ponies, no matter what they are, can live together.” Sunny sighed and looked up at the sky. She could almost picture it, seeing pegasi fly happily across the bay. Unicorns helping earth ponies levitate heavy equipment. Earth ponies showing the other races around the bay and town.

And it will Sunny. :twilightsmile:

“That is a big ask, Sunny,” Hitch frowned as Sunny continued to daydream, “It will be a big change that not every pony will accept.”

*task

“Where did you get those?” Hitch’s eyes widened, “If ponies saw you running around Maretime Bay with those things on, it will cause a mass panic!”

Which would just be embarrassing to watch. :ajbemused:

Unfortunately, She jumped onto the stool a bit too far, causing the stool to lean forward and topple over, sending Sunny crashing over to the floor. Hitch was quick to help his friend up and dusted her off.

Oofity. 😣

“Did you dad say there once was a pony who had both?” Hitch asked from below her.

your*

Hitch: welp i guess something kept that dream alive

Hitch wasnt Against friendship
He just didn't think it would work
But now he sees its power

Hitch is my favourite out of the five

I also love Hitch! He’s also my favourite out of the main 5!

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