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Zaphod
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The big question I have is if all of the transformations are inanimate
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At the risk of spoiling things, I can tell you they will not all be inanimate. Although I do enjoy it a bunch
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Okay cool.
I hope Dash's is one that falls more on the fun side for her (like it's something she'd kinda go along with regardless of the Pixies' influence), but that's more because she's my favorite of the mane 6, so I partially dread situations like this where the whole group gets mind controlled.
I'll still keep an eye on this story, though
At the very least, I hope Flutterplant would become bigger and stronger enough to move around on her own. Probably using vines to move around like octopus or become an anthro-plant hybrid? So that she could hunt down her preys instead of laying and waiting like this.
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Fun idea! Of course, I'd like to get through the main six's transformations first before some of those extra scenes start coming into play, haha.
Who is next after Fluttershy?
Try saying that five times really fast.
So as I understand, these pixies are like a motile, sentient version of Killing Joke (those who have read Fallout: Equestria will know what I mean, I hope?).
i can't wait to see what other transformations will feature next. im hoping Twilight gets some huge breasts!
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You will like the next chapter, in that case!
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I haven't read much of FO:E, but from the little I know of it: yes! Mischievous little creatures that revel in transforming their victims into embarrassing and potentially permanent forms!
Well, I'm sure this won't go horribly awry in any unforeseen ways.
Looking forward to seeing what else you have in store.
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In this case, Fluttershy's been turned into a meme!
Another score! These pixies would soon take over Discord's job before anypony realize it.
Not exactly a species swap, more like tribal swap, but still a pretty good read.
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They might even be more effective than him! I guess we'll see how bad the other girls get it!
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Yeah, that's a fair point. Species swap is the closest thing I could think of to describe an Alicorn to Pegasus in regards to transformation terms, but it's not a perfect fit. Still, glad you enjoyed, and thanks for commenting!
The editor and author argued for a week over this line and whether it was too cheesy, even for a bodice ripper.
In any case, these pixies are definitely playing with fire. Or worse, rainbows. We'll see if this explodes in their faces in time.
Delicious stuff!!!! Hopefully Rarity and AJ have a scene where they fulfil lots of Lesbian stuff! like giant tits, huge asses, big pussies, real delicious sluts!
This is superb, as was the last chapter. Can't wait to see what fates are in store for the other gals...
Hoping we get more unique or weird transformations as we continue, this chapter was rather boring for me since not much really changed and if anything it was more a body swap. I'm also big on humiliation and her being trapped in a book kind of negates that aspect of a tf. There are so few good transformation stories on this site, so this first chapter made me hopeful for more animal or inanimate tfs.
I'm also so over breast and genital expansion as the only transformation focus, especially busty unrealistic bimbo expansion type transformations. I'm hoping not all of them will be that, cause it's just boring as far as tf is concerned end is rather see more unique stuff.
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To each their own, I suppose. I decided that the overarching idea of turning into a book character and being taken into the story was unique enough that it didn't warrant a more obscure transformation.
Thanks for reading anyway!
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Don't get me wrong (I had just woke up and the power had went out so I was a bit grumpy so apologies if I came across harsh), I loved chapter 1 and what is written and chapter 2 is very well written, it just was a bit vanilla especially coming off of chapter 1.
And I would agree the idea of going into a book in unique, but mostly what happens inside the book is something that could have happened out in the real world. I'd say if you took the getting sucked out of the book out but kept everything else the same, the scene wouldn't really change much if you get what I mean.
But don't get me wrong, my comment was more just worried future chapters would continue this trend, rather then saying everything you wrote was bad. I like variety more than anything and even if this chapter didn't hit for me, I'm hopeful future chapters will. This site need more TF stories and i'm excited to read more. Please keep it up :D
3 down 3 to go and I’m wondering what will happen to Big Mac later on in the story?
Ooo, amazing chapter, my favorite so far. Love the in depth detail of the transformation, and a cow tf was a good choice.
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Who knows! It seems that the pixies have gotten ahold of him now, I hope nothing embarrassing and transformative happens by the end of the story!
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Thanks for the read! I put a lot of work into this one and the next, and they're definitely the biggest chapters, so hopefully that comes across well!
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Do you intend the transformation to be... infective?
I love the mind control/name changes!!!!! Keep em coming!
Kinda hope that Big Mac, instead of turning into a cow or bull, kinda gets anthropomorphized and memory wiped into thinking he's always had "Bessie".
That's just me, though.
Lol I just imagined pinkie was a cream filled pie or something. Rarity sex doll haha eh mind weird
There's something truly bizarre in seeing an anthro character getting turned into a quadruped. In any case... yeah, well-fed pixies mean it's a bad time for anyone who crosses their path. We'll see what happens to Mac.
Certainly one way for them to get closer. We're running out of main characters at a rapid clip... though Pinkie might be a bit more wily than the pixies may anticipate.
Very hot, I was wondering if Spike would get transformed and very happy that he was the main focus of this chapter. Turning him into a dildo was a great idea and I love the detail on his transformation. He's one of my favorite characters so it was a nice surprise especially since male Transformations tend to be lacking beyond gender TF. Fantastic job.
Loved to see more Male TFS going forwards, IDK how many character you plan after the mane 6 but student 6 might be fun as a group TF with all of them realizing they're Transforming together but unable to stop it.
The rarity stuff was a little tacked on but it was good. Rarity's not really a character I care too much about, but I think pairing them together in this way worked very well.
Really hoping for something good for rainbow, as she's another character I really like. I do also worry a bit about personality death. Like hopefully there is an overall happy ending at the end, and i'm totally up for rethinking who they are (like spike thinking as himself as a toy) but hopefully it isn't permanent or spike permanently losses sense of who he was.
Very nice. Oh yes
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I don't share your opinion about Rarity's TF being "tacked on": I felt it was a nice conclusion to this chapter, despite being shorter than Spike's (OTOH, I think it wouldn't have gained much by dragging it out, so I'm pretty happy with it as is).
If anything, I remember seeing a picture of Rarity turned into an anthro sex doll once and it kinda reminded me of it...
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I didn't mean it as a negative really, just with the story focusing so far on the mane 6, I expected her to be the focus and spike to be the side transformation. Most of the chapter was about spike, with rarity just being a small conclusion at the end, which as I said was good and I agree i don't think it needed dragged out either. Just more noting that it subverted what I was expecting.
Are you going to make a new chapter today yet?
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I didn't have the chapter ready last weekend, and have been working on it for a release this week. Hope you enjoy!
That was an interesting chapter.
Kinda disappointed that hers was an inanimate TF, but that's just a me thing.
Not gonna lie, I kinda hope the transformations get reversed in the end, with the mental effects lingering after. It probably won't end that way, but I just wanted to throw that out there.
And even if the TFs are permanent, it's still a good story.
I even have an interesting idea for a Spitfire TF that could be an extra chapter if I could send it in
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Thanks for sticking around even if it wasn't your ideal outcome! I've got the rest of the story planned out, but there's a lot of leeway for side stories.
Feel free to go with and write any ideas you have yourself with the same concept! I'm not likely to take any ideas for the remainder of this story at least. :P
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Alright.
My idea is that Spitfire comes to Ponyville to look for where Dash is for Wonderbolts practice, only for the Pixies to turn her into essentially a living toy bimbo version of Dash herself. Kinda similar to Dash's own TF, except she can still move around.
I do have possible ideas for other characters, but before I send any in, I'd like to know who else is getting changed in this main story
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Just Pinkie, and then likely an Epilogue chapter. There might be a few other TFs mentioned in passing, but not focused on.
fives down one to go and that be all for this story right?
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Alright.
Should I put my other ideas here or in PMs?
And are there any characters you won't do this kind of TF with or are they all fair game?
Breaking news: Actions have consequences. Let's just hope these pixies don't end up destroying Equestria.
Eh, if all else fails, Discord can undo this. (Though "can" and "will" are very different things.)
Pinkie the loving Pie. Eh no that won’t do it’s too obvious.
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You can put them here if you want, I don't mind. I don't think anyone's really 'off-limits' with a TF, though obviously the younger characters wouldn't have sexual connotations.
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Where has Discord been, anyway? This sort of thing has his grubby fingerprints all over it!
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I just had to save Pinkie for last, since I enjoy writing her a lot and her chapter could be unpredictable as far as outcome! We'll see what the pixies have in store for her soon!
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That does kinda change one thing I had in mind, but not by too much, fortunately.
As for the ideas I have:
Apple Bloom gets turned into a literal apple
Sweetie Belle gets turned into an actual dictionary (originally it was going to be of just sexual terms)
Granny Smith gets turned into a young bombshell bimbo with no memory of her past as the Apple Family matriarch
Big Mac, like I said when the AJ chapter was posted, gets anthropomorphized and memory wiped into thinking he's a cowboy with Bessie. Maybe even in a relationship with post TF Granny Smith.
The other Pie sisters get turned into dildo shaped rocks that their former parents start using to get themselves off.
Shining Armor gets turned into a young mare guard and a living toy for the others.
If I think of more later I'll post them
It was a fun chapter. But I rather expected something different for each chapter. I mean, wasn't becoming a toy is almost the same as what happened to Spike and Rarity?
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Discord Thr author all along. Gasp we reading his fan fiction
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A fair point, though I tried to spice things up with the shrinking and group sex. The bigger theme I was going for was each form being something the victim "wished for" in a way, and for all of Rainbow's bravado, I see her giving up control as a pet/sub.
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What a twist! Truth is I just don't write Discord that often, and don't really enjoy writing his character personally. He probably won't make an appearance here.
Very nice chapter. Subby Dash is def the best dash, and I did enjoy this one quite a bit. I like that the focus here was slightly different from the previous chapter, helped it feel like not a rehash, though I do think it could have benefited from having like applejack between this chapter and spike's chapter just to break them up a bit. But yea very nice job overall, excited for the finale. :D