10931059 They might even be more effective than him! I guess we'll see how bad the other girls get it!
10931113 Yeah, that's a fair point. Species swap is the closest thing I could think of to describe an Alicorn to Pegasus in regards to transformation terms, but it's not a perfect fit. Still, glad you enjoyed, and thanks for commenting!
Delicious stuff!!!! Hopefully Rarity and AJ have a scene where they fulfil lots of Lesbian stuff! like giant tits, huge asses, big pussies, real delicious sluts!
Hoping we get more unique or weird transformations as we continue, this chapter was rather boring for me since not much really changed and if anything it was more a body swap. I'm also big on humiliation and her being trapped in a book kind of negates that aspect of a tf. There are so few good transformation stories on this site, so this first chapter made me hopeful for more animal or inanimate tfs.
I'm also so over breast and genital expansion as the only transformation focus, especially busty unrealistic bimbo expansion type transformations. I'm hoping not all of them will be that, cause it's just boring as far as tf is concerned end is rather see more unique stuff.
10931420 To each their own, I suppose. I decided that the overarching idea of turning into a book character and being taken into the story was unique enough that it didn't warrant a more obscure transformation.
10931562 Don't get me wrong (I had just woke up and the power had went out so I was a bit grumpy so apologies if I came across harsh), I loved chapter 1 and what is written and chapter 2 is very well written, it just was a bit vanilla especially coming off of chapter 1.
And I would agree the idea of going into a book in unique, but mostly what happens inside the book is something that could have happened out in the real world. I'd say if you took the getting sucked out of the book out but kept everything else the same, the scene wouldn't really change much if you get what I mean.
But don't get me wrong, my comment was more just worried future chapters would continue this trend, rather then saying everything you wrote was bad. I like variety more than anything and even if this chapter didn't hit for me, I'm hopeful future chapters will. This site need more TF stories and i'm excited to read more. Please keep it up :D
Are the transformations permanent or temporary? I've only read the first chapter upon commenting, so if this has been confirmed/denied later in the fic I wouldn't know
Another score! These pixies would soon take over Discord's job before anypony realize it.
Not exactly a species swap, more like tribal swap, but still a pretty good read.
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They might even be more effective than him! I guess we'll see how bad the other girls get it!
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Yeah, that's a fair point. Species swap is the closest thing I could think of to describe an Alicorn to Pegasus in regards to transformation terms, but it's not a perfect fit. Still, glad you enjoyed, and thanks for commenting!
The editor and author argued for a week over this line and whether it was too cheesy, even for a bodice ripper.
In any case, these pixies are definitely playing with fire. Or worse, rainbows. We'll see if this explodes in their faces in time.
Delicious stuff!!!! Hopefully Rarity and AJ have a scene where they fulfil lots of Lesbian stuff! like giant tits, huge asses, big pussies, real delicious sluts!
This is superb, as was the last chapter. Can't wait to see what fates are in store for the other gals...
Hoping we get more unique or weird transformations as we continue, this chapter was rather boring for me since not much really changed and if anything it was more a body swap. I'm also big on humiliation and her being trapped in a book kind of negates that aspect of a tf. There are so few good transformation stories on this site, so this first chapter made me hopeful for more animal or inanimate tfs.
I'm also so over breast and genital expansion as the only transformation focus, especially busty unrealistic bimbo expansion type transformations. I'm hoping not all of them will be that, cause it's just boring as far as tf is concerned end is rather see more unique stuff.
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To each their own, I suppose. I decided that the overarching idea of turning into a book character and being taken into the story was unique enough that it didn't warrant a more obscure transformation.
Thanks for reading anyway!
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Don't get me wrong (I had just woke up and the power had went out so I was a bit grumpy so apologies if I came across harsh), I loved chapter 1 and what is written and chapter 2 is very well written, it just was a bit vanilla especially coming off of chapter 1.
And I would agree the idea of going into a book in unique, but mostly what happens inside the book is something that could have happened out in the real world. I'd say if you took the getting sucked out of the book out but kept everything else the same, the scene wouldn't really change much if you get what I mean.
But don't get me wrong, my comment was more just worried future chapters would continue this trend, rather then saying everything you wrote was bad. I like variety more than anything and even if this chapter didn't hit for me, I'm hopeful future chapters will. This site need more TF stories and i'm excited to read more. Please keep it up :D
Did she turn into wereshine?
Are the transformations permanent or temporary? I've only read the first chapter upon commenting, so if this has been confirmed/denied later in the fic I wouldn't know