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I think it'd be fun if this were to get a sequel sometime later where Trixie ends up going through several hypnosis TF's.
Needs an epilogue of her losing to all the hypnotized girls. Her acting and costume tips were top notch!
Good. Extremely good. I love the instant teasing, taking under, and snap to post TF — though the pace might be a bit too rapid even for that, could definitely have used more fun dwelling on the cute sluts. Rainbow barely even got bullied at all!
I love love loved the scene with the gloves, that's the kind of novel, tasty stuff that really makes silly stories like this work. Good job on getting something out in time for Nightmare Night, definitely agreed that seeing an aftermath would be extremely satisfying in one way or another.
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Thank you very much for the comment.
This one was definitely a lot faster paced than my usual stories, in part because I wanted to have it out in time for the holiday and also largely because of how many characters got a spotlight. The last two stories I did involving all of the Mane Six in this manner were three to five times the size of this one. I do agree that Rainbow Dork needs to be bullied regularly and extensively though.
Toon gloves are great and definitely need to have more love in fanfic. Much like toony silliness in general.
Been a looner wishing for more pony looner fics for a long time, but this isn't exactly what had in mind.
But Rarity secretly loving balloons isn't too far-fetched. If she doesn't mind her mane and coat getting staticky.
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Love to see a good sexy toon tf and sadly they're not super common, especially with ponies.
This was great and I'd love to see more.
Really fun! Would love to see more, especially with Rainbow Dork XD
We need a solo story for Rainbow Dork!
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Agreed. There absolutely needs to be more stories about hypnotized dork/nerd Dash.