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Writing about magic, romance and the bonds of friendship!

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A series of short friendshipping stories and cute scenes centred around Rainbow Dash and her number one fan, Scootaloo!

Each 'chapter' is a standalone story (unless marked otherwise), so feel free to skip ahead if you don't like how one is written or if you find a title that takes your fancy.

Chapters (18)
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Comments ( 68 )

I love these both! So sweet!

I can't wait for more. :ajsmug:

1269810 :twilightsmile:

1270011 Thank you very much! I'm a fan of your Appledash project so the praise means a lot. Expect more in about a week's time!

Sooo cute. I want more like button to click.

You write a really good Sweetie Belle. I'm impressed, I can never get her quite right. Great job! :ajsmug:

I'm starting to love this fic/collection of fics more and more with each chapter. Keep em comin man.

Makes me want to find out what happened to Rd's mom.

Fodder for a later chapter, perhaps? I'm sure you have an interesting head canon for Rainbow's history.

1304661 Thank you again! I appreciate it :twilightsmile:

1306387 Cheers, I'm glad to hear it! I'm going to be publishing one every week so stay tuned :pinkiehappy:

1306394 Hmm, I suppose I could expand on that in a later chapter... I'll keep it in mind! Thanks for the comment!

Simply brilliant! May the stars shine ever brightly for little Scoots! :pinkiehappy:

Ponies can't play cards.:derpytongue2:

1400495 Maaaybe... :twilightsmile: She is really special after all. I think I'd like to do a story expanding on their friendship and/or past together later, so that's why I had the bit at the end.

1309937 Thank you! And I'm sure they will :pinkiehappy:

1372954 :pinkiegasp:

I don't think I've made it fully clear how much I love this story.

Each chapter is simply beautiful - a work of art. You capture emotion to a tee.

1435501 Thanks, I really appreciate that! Sorry I haven't released a new chapter in a while though :fluttershysad:

I don't know if you've been reading the blog posts but I had an idea for this story which evolved into something of an epic. I'm going to put that on hold and restore the one week deadline so I can get some more short, cute Rainbow/Scoots stories in this little compilation!

The i's at the end need to be in brackets for italics :3
But great story! The fog idea is pretty cool, haven't seen it anywhere else! :D

1730011 Whoops! Thanks for pointing that out :twilightsheepish: I'm glad you liked the story and the fog idea - it was just another random idea I had. These short, quick stories are good for that, I think. Thank you very much for the comment! :pinkiehappy:

I don't even know where to start to tell you how much I like this chapter. It's just as wonderful as the camping episode with them.
Don't ever stop writing those.
Happy Hearth's Warming to you as well.

Heh, I was starting to think you through shipping our way. Loved this chapter as well as the others, keep up the good work!
Happy hearts warming eve, and Merry Christmas if you celebrate it!

Oh man, I just reread all these stories... the feels, the diabeetus causing, heart attack inducing feels. Excellent writing.

1840525 I loved that episode! It means a lot to hear that, thank you so much! I only have about fifteen more semi-weekly episodes scheduled for this story, but I'll never stop writing things like it, because I love it :twilightsmile:

1849463 Thanks! The 'make it sound like shipping' approach is apparently quite common, though stories like that usually end in something random or funny. I prefer cutesy :twilightsheepish: Merry Christmas to you too!

1891686 Feels induced? Mission accomplished :rainbowdetermined2: (Thank you :twilightsmile: )

Awww adorable Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle

So, Diamond Tiara has a crush on Scootaloo, and Dash is trying to set them up on a date... Wow did not see that one coming.

2863362 Me neither :derpytongue2: Not sure where that came from but there it is!

Aaah, the cuteness...melting my heart, well done! Exceptional :)

Very cute, scootalove is very good, yes yes :scootangel:

2890669 That's very kind, thank you! :twilightsmile:

2897377 Thanks! I agree - Scootalove is always nice to see. :rainbowdetermined2::scootangel:

2900208 This WILL go on, right? Please say yes ^^

2900298 Yes, it certainly will! But only 'cause you asked nicely :raritywink:

I'm trying to update this with a new story/episode every week, at least until I've finished my list of prompts - of which there are ten left. You can expect the next one around 25th July!

2900433 My love for you in- ...erm, your stories! Yeah. Increases! Indeed. :scootangel:
Looking forward!!!
25th July, HURRY!!!! :flutterrage:

2900433 No offence but I think your calendar is running a little slow ^^ (Just kiddin' around, and dropping a major hint I can't wait for the next chapter/episode)

2941048 Hehe, yeah, sorry about that! I am working on it, though it's been going rather slowly. I can't see it taking longer than a few more days though. Hang in there!

This was so sweet, you proved me right again to follow the series.
Though you might wanna change the [Slice of Life] to [Cuteness Incoming].

1372954
And they can't talk, but yet they do it.

Do the impossible/Break the unbreakable/ Row, Row, Fight the power!

Cuteness overload, prepare thy mind or brace for heart attack of the daaaaw:heart:

That was so cute that words cannot describe it. WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE IT. :heart: :raritycry:

Still awesome :)
And SO cute...

Asking nicely : More please! :D

Gave a thumbs up after the first chapter...now I wish I had more thumbs to give :D These are fantastic! Very touching. I cannot wait to read the rest.

3010881 Everyone seems to agree, so I've given it a [Cuteness] tag :raritywink: I'm very glad you liked it, thanks!

3011030 Sounds painful! Hehe, thanks a lot! :scootangel:

3011084 :yay: Thanks!

3011265 I know that feeling - so many words to choose from but none of them work! "So cute" sounds good to me though :twilightsmile: Thank you!

3012035 Yayness! Thank you once again! More on the way - though updates will be a bit slower than usual because I'm taking my time with them (as I did with this latest chapter).

3015438 One can always use more thumbs! :twilightsmile: Hey, thanks very much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the stories as well!

3016178 Aww...well the awesome thing about this is that its kinda worth the wait. Not to say I like waiting, its just really really REALLY good. Good luck!

Especially the first half was hilarious. :pinkiehappy:

I really like your version of Derpy/Ditzy Doo. I'm a fan of Ditzy Doo as a deeper character ("Shipping and Handling", for example), and it usually really bothers me if someone writes her as nothing but a clumsy, muffin-obsessed ditz. However, it seems you have found that little spot where you do just that and make it work. The Derpy in this chapter makes me smile, and in the end that's really all I expect from a well-written Derpy/Ditzy Doo. :twilightsmile:

3027695 Thanks! I haven't read a lot of Derpy/Ditzy myself - rarely as more than a side character with a small part (very much like in this chapter) - but I must say she's always succeeded in making me smile when I do read about her. I personally see her as very clumsy and a complete airhead, the former of which is a trait I share, while the latter is one I very much admire :twilightsheepish:

I know what you mean about usually being bothered by that particular portrayal though - I suppose some people prefer to write her as a shallow, joke character or some such. I much prefer my version, and I'm glad you did too!

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Aren't those random ideas the best ones? :pinkiegasp: And you have some really good ones, too. :pinkiehappy:

I'm hooked. :pinkiesmile:

There are no words to describe how fantastic and wonderful and... just... Ngh

You. Are amazing.

Asking nicely for more. Please XD

3033687 Aw, thank you! :twilightsmile:

3159190 Oh gosh, it's been more than a month already? :twilightoops: Sorry for the huge wait! I've been really busy, and I've gotten kind of carried away with my drawing during the spare time I do have.

Since you asked nicely, I'll do my best to get this going again!

3173799 No problem. Quality over quantity ^^ Though quantity & quality would be totally awesome too XD

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