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Scootaloo finds a photograph in a box of Rainbow's old things, and Rainbow tells her the story behind it - the story of how she and Fluttershy met, grew close, and finally came to live in Ponyville...

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AND THEN THEY FUCKED

1652155 Subtlety is my middle name.

God damn it 1651950, this is why we can't have nice things.

That's a nice story. No idea why Scootaloo is even there in the first place, though.

1651950

Well that was cute. There was not a single inappropriate thing in that entire heartwarming tale.

*scrolls down

Damnit.

1652278

One of these days, you'll regret something.

You will regret it SO HARD.

Oh hey, it's my favorite ship and it's written well, too. Nice and warm and fuzzy without getting into feelsporn territory.
Good job. :yay:

Now,that was a cute story:fluttershysad::rainbowkiss:

Aaaand cue the DAWWWWWW

Love the story, but...

Fluttershy afraid of spiders? Really? I mean, I don't think we have seen her with spiders on the show, but it seems extremely unlikely. Dragons is one thing, but if she loves snakes and parasprites why would she be afraid of spiders?

Eh, well, like I said, really enjoyed the story otherwise. Would love to know what it is Fluttershy said to Rainbow though. I'm assuming its something along the lines of "you are my best friend", but still... Curious.

Yes! Even Rainbow approves of Rarijack!:pinkiehappy: That made my day.

and what would have been funny was when she saw Rarity she said "You want juicy?" then she throws the book.
I would have fell off my seat laughing.:pinkiehappy:

1653674

Jeebers, that is what should have happened! :rainbowderp:

That was adorable. I LOVED the friend fiction joke.

1651950 Actually, I believe the correct statement is "And Then Absolutely Nothing Sexual Happened."
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Short but sweet...not the ship i sail....but a good read is a good read!

Personally I could sail that ship all day long. I really loved this fic, and it pained e when Rainbow never whispered it loud enough for us to hear. "My god! Speak up will you!"

fantastic story i loved it but like everyone you have to wonder what fluttershy said to rainbowdash. o well another story for the favorites :twilightsmile:

This was awesome. I love Flutteshy and Rainbow Dash relationships their usually adorable.

5 mustaches out of 5 mustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

1658868 You receive an extra mustache for those mustaches.:moustache:

Enjoy. :moustache::moustache::moustache:

You have done well... perhaps too well!
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:pinkiegasp: FLUTTERDASH FIC? :rainbowkiss::yay:

~MolestiaApproved!~ :trollestia:

1651950 I'd be lying if I said that wasn't going through my head when I got to the end. I managed to resist the temptation though :rainbowlaugh:

1652166 Thank you :pinkiehappy:

1652258 Good point - why is Scootaloo there? :scootangel: That didn't even occur to me while writing... I'll come up with something and edit it in soon. Thank you!

1652271 :yay: Thanks!

1652372 Thanks! Glad you liked it!

1652386 I hope that's a good 'Oh my!' The Scootangel suggests it is, so I'll say thank you :pinkiehappy:

1652681 Thanks, I was going for cute :twilightsmile:

1652787 ...I was also going for DAWWWWWW! :twilightsheepish: Thanks!

1652827 I can't say whether she would be afraid of spiders (though I would agree that it's unlikely) - but maybe it was less about her being afraid and more about her wanting Rainbow there to hold her hoof, like she always has been? That's how I see it at least. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for the comment! And as for what Fluttershy said to Rainbow, I'm definitely going to leave that up to peoples' imaginations.

1653674 :pinkiegasp: That has to happen! When I rewrite the story, I'm definitely going to add that in. Thank you very much!

1655126 I've got to admit that I still chuckle when I read that part :twilightsheepish: Glad you liked it, thanks!

1656485 Awesome, thank you!

1657611 Hehe, well that's between the two of them ♥ Not that that's going to stop me from assuming though :twilightsmile:

1658782 Thank you! And it's cool that everyone is wondering about it, makes me feel clever :rainbowlaugh:

1658868 I agree, Fluttershy x Rainbow Dash is an adorable pairing :twilightsmile: Thanks for the moustaches!

1660128 Aw, that picture :rainbowkiss: Thanks very much!

1660466 I'll drink to that! :twilightsheepish:

Thank you all (again) for reading and commenting! It's very much appreciated and you are all most awesome!

1665061 Come to the dark side. We have sex.

Subtle and beautifully told.Thumbs up!

Awesome, simply awesome. Love it. :scootangel:

Very Sweet and Adorable story, Great Job. :twilightsheepish:

thumbs up to you and your very.... lets just say indescribable story.

10/10 yays for you
:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

so adorbs, Flutterdash is one of my favorite pairings after all.

Man, that was just too cute :twilightsmile:
I like how you left what she said open to interpretation too. This was a really nice story. Loading some of it into my head canon.

Now THAT was a nice and heartwarming story. I can see that being the script for a future episode. The characterization was spot on. I really liked the recollection of Dash and Fluttershy's past together. The comedy sprinkled throughout was also a very nice touch. Great job writing this story. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic writing!

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:rainbowkiss: A very, very, very belated "Thanks!" to all of you. This is what happens when I let myself say "Ah, I'm tired, I'll reply to these comments tomorrow." :derpytongue2:

2535902 Thank you very much indeed! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it. I reread it myself the other day and it's still one of my proudest works. I fondly remember being extremely inspired and having a great time writing this, so that's probably why.

I certainly hope to keep it up, thanks!

I'm assuming that this takes place in the same loose continuity as your ScootaDash stories?

3011430 That's right, yes. It was originally going to be another chapter of that series, but I was so proud of how it turned out that I felt it deserved its own story altogether :twilightsmile:

Love the story. :heart:

(And I know exactly what Fluttershy said to Rainbow in her room...and it works perfectly in return when Rainbow says it back to her. :yay:)

That was cute. I liked it. :twilightsmile:

I only have a few very minor nitpicks, such as Fluttershy being afraid of a spider, which seems unlikely. Otherwise, it was a solid story.

4447548 Apparently I'm not as gifted.as you are:twilightblush: so please share. :yay:
( If this sounds sarcastic its not )

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The great thing about the way this story set it up is that there are a number of things that can all fit there just as well. I can come up with half-dozen easily that would fit - and which is "best" would change depending on my mood at the moment. And, to be honest, I can't recall precisely which of those thoughts (if any) it was when I made that comment.

Leaving it open to individual readers is a key element of the story, so I won't post any of my thoughts here. But if you still want to hear them, send me a private message and I'll give them there.

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