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Following the hectic rush of Twilight's coronation, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy spend an afternoon together.

A quick Flutterdash snippet that takes place shortly after the Season 3 finale and assumes an existing relationship between them. Written for a short story writing challenge between myself and Roarin.

Many thanks to kas92 for the cover image!

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When I saw the title, I decided to read it while listening to my video compilation of the song A Walk in the Woods from every Halo game it is in. It was a neat experience. I like this one-shot. Do more please.

My video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJMeRr5pqtU

Aw, how cute! A nice read. Well done! :twilightsmile:

Well damn, That's a lot cuter then mine >.> Nice job bro!

Awww, this was adorable! :twilightsmile: I can see Fluttershy feeling this way, and Rainbow trying to assure her in her own way, and how they play off each other is so cute. Even though Rainbow may not be the best at expressing her feelings, it's easy to tell that she truly loves Fluttershy and does manage to open up to her in a way she doesn't anyone else. So cute! :raritystarry:

:yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

I'm listening to the completely wrong music for this story but I liked it anyways.

Dddaaawww that was so adorable!:pinkiehappy::heart:

2263405 Hehe, nice. I tried it myself and yeah, it was pretty neat :pinkiehappy: Glad you like it! I'd like to do a whole series of these one-shots, starting from Season 1 and developing a relationship between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, through to the end of Season 3. It'd be quite an undertaking for me though, so it'll need some more thought put into it first. But I expect I'll get around to it eventually!

2264084 Thank you very much!

2264509 Thanks, I love writing the cute stuff :twilightsmile: I think your fic was a lot more creative though.

2265640 Aw, thank you so much! That's exactly how I see their relationship - with Rainbow being able to be open and honest (and occasionally 'sappy') with Fluttershy, where she might be afraid to do so with other ponies, since she wants to protect her reputation. They're definitely a cute pair, and I plan to write more Flutterdash in the future :yay:

2265894 First thing that sprang to mind was Rick Astley. That's how many times I've been rickrolled :twilightsheepish: Hehe, thank you!

2266508 Awesome, thanks very much!

Aww, this was absolutely adorable! it was so sweet and fluffy, I loved it :heart:

This was just perfectly adorable, by the sound of it they are keeping their relationship a secret? (Poorly by the sound of it, if FS has noticed ponies seeing them kiss when RD thought she was safe xD)

Short, but sweet. There isn't really anything I would change in this story. Nice job! :ajsmug:

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