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Scootaloo came to Ponyville as an orphan, and has been struggling with just that fact ever since her arrival. But recently she's been wondering why she became an orphan, and many things are brought to question, such as why she was abandoned. Was she not worth anything to her parents, but more importantly, if she wasn't worth anything, were she not special, and how would she then get her important cutie mark? This story will depict how the questions and their answers will affect the various relationships between Scootaloo and her friends.

Featured the 13th of August. (OHMAHGERD)

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 189 )

This is awesome! :pinkiehappy: Great job :ajsmug:

I cried a little for Scootaloo, it's always hard watching someone who tries to act tough break down. :fluttercry:

Great chapter! :pinkiehappy: This story is looking good. :twilightsheepish:

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Thankyou so much! :) I'm really glad you like it - it's my first one, so any critique is always helpful. Ofcourse, don't hesitate to let me know if you like it! :raritywink:

Hmm.. interesting! can't wait to see more :pinkiesmile:

Only thing I have to ask about this chapter is what happened to Sweetie Belle, did Rarity explain Scootaloo's situation to her? :unsuresweetie:

This is still good though. :twilightsmile:

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Not yet no - ofcourse Sweetie Belle will know from someone, but it seems that Applebloom's and Applejack's relationship is 'perfect' compared to Sweetie Belle and Rarity, which was what I wanted to depict. Fear not, she will know! :trixieshiftright:

will we get to see rarity and sweetie belle talk in the next chapter?

this one was sweet. i loved it :pinkiesmile:

Awesome chapter! :rainbowdetermined2: Can't wait to see how this turns out!

YAY!!! continue soon

Aw I love seeing how much Sweetie Belle and Rarity's relationship as sistes has imporved, it's so adorable. :heart:

Now I feel even worse for Scootaloo, no filly should have to suffer the way she does. :fluttercry:

620167 people suffer worse than Scootaloo. In my opinion, no family is better than an abusive family.

Poor Scootaloo, she's really broken down right now. :fluttercry:

Wow poor Scootaloo, I hope that things get better for her anyway another awesome chapter.

Awesome chapter! :rainbowdetermined2: Poor Scootaloo :fluttercry:

Princess Luna is best Princess. Scootaloo is best pony:scootangel:.

I'm glad you got her home safely, and I did enjoy the reunion scene. I think you portrayed Rainbow Dash rather well. A week to herself though, Scoots is going to go crazy. Can't wait to see what's next.

Oh, nice to see that Princess Luna was able to help Scootaloo find her way back home. :heart:

Looks like Scootaloo has found something to do to keep herself busy for the next week, good for her. :scootangel:

*Come on Bronies don't deny it, you wish you could leap into this fic and give Scootaloo a hug* :pinkiesad2:

681852 We all KNOW you can, just keep trying, you'll get there someday. :scootangel:

681966 if roidrage can do it so can you

681999 Just do it the honest way, not the 'Roidrage' way. :unsuresweetie:

682134 lol can't wait for the next chapter

When Cheerilee (4 e's) said she was an orphan, I thought for sure she would be Scootaloo's long-lost sister.

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Now that's something I've never thought about. :pinkiegasp:

Wow that was a awesome chapter i can't wait for the next one.:twilightsmile:

That was great! I love how RD and Scootaloo both have a stuffed animal! :heart: so cute! Nice job.

I think Scootaloo might be going about this the wrong way. :rainbowhuh:

Poor Scootaloo she's worked herself to the point of exhaustion and now she can't do anything. :applecry:

Only up to chapter 3, but enjoying this story so far. My bed, sadly, sings a siren call to me. I shall return upon the morrow, to continue reading this fine work of words and wills.

In other news: I get weird after 4am.

Oh why did you have to do that Scootaloo has just managed to fly and now you go and crush her spirits, please correct that in the next few chapters. :scootangel:

Good job I love :scootangel: and :rainbowlaugh: fanfics.

There are a few grammatical errors here and there that should be fixed (I noticed you tend to not use the correct form of 'too'), but other then that a very cute story. I am looking forward to reading more.

I always enjoy these forms of fiction. The orphan story is... touching, and I'm one cold hearted bastard so well done. You have made one old scale rotted dragon shed a tear.

900759 I got to agree I love the ole Scootaloo is alone and needs a family. Then gets one.

Rainbow Dash made Twilight think she was pregnant that was priceless, I wonder if Pinkie Pie could pull a stunt like that? :rainbowlaugh:

901032 Indeed, I was always a big softy for the rainbow Dash adopting Scoots. I need to learn how to.. soften up like this or my own orphan Scoots will never have the intended effect.

Let me guess, thanks to Spike, there's gonna be a rumor going around that Rainbow Dash is pregnant that's gonna end up causing her all sorts of grief. :rainbowhuh:

Rainbow dash may become scootaloos mother...so awesome:rainbowkiss:

901123 after PARTY.MOV... anythings is possible :ajsleepy:

910075 Geez that was bad in my tastes, SWAG. MOV had better be good! :facehoof:

913310 SHED.MOV was where everything went to hell in my opinion....

913707 I think the problem is that SHED.MOV was the best of the series but it also marked the offical conformation that it was becoming a series that could be milked for more memes but nothing else, I'll never figure out how PARTY.MOV made it to the number 2 spot on The Movie Brony's Top Ten List for June. :facehoof:

913878 Meh... i liked the first two, but SHED.MOV was where it crossed the line, than PARTY.MOV where they got even worse with the brutalization... MAGIC.MOV wasnt that bad...

915577 I agree at least MAGIC.MOV tried to be decent, I say the worst was APPPLE.MOV since until PARTY.MOV we had no way of knowing wheter it was in the cannon MOV universe. :facehoof:

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