I'm a jackoftrades, pilot, hobby engineer, writer, philosopher of the creed: The truth is absolute & unchanging, so seek the truths that change for no one & you'll find the truths worth holding on to.
To Scootaloo crusading for her cutie mark had always been more of an excuse to get her friends to join her in her idea of fun. But now that they have earned their cutie marks and moved on with their lives, Scootaloo is determined that today she will earn her own, and catch up to her friends.
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Not favorable but I gave it a like. Very good read
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Thank you. Having people declare my stories as favorites is nice and all, but it has never been the point of sharing the stories that passed through my mind.
Entertaining the readers has always been the primary point, and judging from your response I succeeded to some level at that.
And the secondarily point is practicing my writing so I can do justice to the stories that mean the most to me when I finally feel I'm good enough to write them... which is more or less a continuation of the first point, as I simply want others to be entertained by those stories as much as they amused me playing them out in my mind's eye.
4519031 Like I always say keep up the good writing. I know what ya mean. Followed
Nice story!
Good story
Awesome stunt, good set up and execution of the move. I wouldn't mind seeing more stunts from Scootaloo.
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Thank you, truly, thank you. Funny story.
I had only thought up one more Scootaloo-special move, and that is something she never uses in her stunt routine. However, in contemplating a response to your comment, I think I've just refined Scootaloo's stunt show scene when I get around to writing the story that contains said event item.
4526113 I hope we get to see it!
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You'll get to read it eventually. See... not so much. Do you have any idea how much of a pain it was for a low art-skill person like me to fix DHX's mistake in the base screen shot just so I make that cover image? Sorry, not fun.
My apologies that it's not going to be the next story I'm writing. But as noted before, once I feel my writing skills are good enough to do it justice I'll write that story.
4536297 I'm more interested in READING it than SEEING it, but take your time, giving it your best effort makes the story even more awesome!
The descriptive narration is fairly well written, albeit the small amount of repetitive sentences. However, the story is good enough that the repetition doesn't detract from the flow.
Good job, man. I give thee one upvote!
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I think I know one of the spots you're talking about... I tried revising it several times in my editing phase, but the revisions either failed to carry the same implications, or were so wordy that they felt even more clunky then the version I first posted.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for the feedback, I'll keep trying to improve. Oh and I've revised that line again. Hope that makes it flow better and still paints the same image.
Whoo, go, Scootaloo!
Very intense setup for her stunt and touching relationship between her and Rainbow Dash.
Wow, they finally did it. we finally got the official cutie mark story for the crusaders. And what an awesome episode crusader of the lost mark was.
Anyway seeing as this is no longer compatible with the show's lore universe I tossed on the alternate universe tag.