She doesn't even need new pants. But who's Sunset to say no to Rarity?
Written for Quills and Sofa's Speedwriting Panic, our prompt was "Pants".
(Sex tag only for the purposes of a comment made, and implication of maybe them having some funky fun times later idk better safe than sorry)
This is almost entirely unchanged from the original version written in 36 minutes.
Sunsarity? Don't mind if I do!
Cute fic C:
Stupid Applejackofalltrades and your stupid fun, funny, and cute story about pants!
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Thanks! And it’s definitely one of those ships I think deserves more love haha
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*snaps fingers* got me there! Glad you enjoyed :>
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I think Sunsarity has plenty of love, don't you? *waggles*
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Coulda always use more!
Then why did you make any changes at all?
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Grammar and awkward phrasing fixes mostly. Kinda hard to be completely grammatically correct when you have 30 minutes to write :P
Heh. Take them off. I'm just imagining some one like Bulk or Lyra walking by as she said that just a bit too loud.
Cutesy, and kind of a bit weird, but quite realistic. Nice!
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Thanks! Weird is easy to come by when you are given the prompt “pants” and half an hour to write haha
Me too bro, me too.
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We already have a Beanis Cinematic Universe group, what's next? The Pants Cinematic Universe group??
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Had. It's over now. They TTGL'd the **** out of Beanos.
I was beginning to wonder if Sunset was going to have a pants related ptsd episode.
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See now that would have been a story but unfortunately I promised to not write a gazillion sad stories lol so i went with more silly here
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There can be comedy in some one suffering a mental breakdown.
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I am aware, but I try to keep stuff like that serious. Plus, I truly just kinda wrote what came to mind :P only had half an hour yknow
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Fair enough.
Adorable

Except the very idea that Bacon Horse wouldn't be at least curvy if not thicc
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you are SO right which is why I made her not thicc for the purposes of this story ;)
awomen to that, sunset
nice meme reference
i am really amazed you got this out in 36 minutes! one interesting thing i found was how this story would also fit a rarijack dynamic as well, with really only needing to change the hints at frugality out of need to something more related to practicality. but then i guess the final pair of pants for applejack wouldn't really be leather pants? in any case, muttering "stupid rarity" at all the stupid rarity things is very relatable, i could definitely feel that
Okay first
I feel personally attacked.
Second, this was just damn good and adorable that I was grinning from start to finish, and both Rarity and Sunset's personalities are very well conveyed despite the short word-length . What I love about these speed-writes is how they encourage writers into turning something really simple such as buying pants into something adorable and wholesome.
Great job Jacks.
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Haha thanks for all the words! I can see what you mean for sure. And yeah, I totally panicked with this one (pun intended)
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Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed, I actually don't remember how I came up with this but such is the magic of speedwrites I guess. Again, thanks for the kind words. I did my best to convey them properly quickly
This was a pretty cute story. Sunset and Rarity work so well in this context, and by Celestia this story is funny. From Sunset's internal catchphrase to the misunderstanding it's just great. In general, I like that this story doesn't take itself too seriously and exaggerates a few things, especially Rarity. The ending is humourous, given the implications. Seems Sunset is buying some figurative pajamas.
Also yeah, I'm definitely guilty of having a very select guild of pants I wear. Sunset isn't alone on that.
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Haha thanks! I did try to make this incredibly silly, so I’m glad that worked.
And me too tbh, I only have like 4 pants
Howdy, hi
Okay, this was a really fun read. The premise is so mundane, but the execution is perfect. Sunset's grumpy attitude and slight naiveness work so well against Rarity's dramaticness. You really hit both characters well in characterization. I love how overtop the reactions are and the casual banter and flow of dialogue both do in the story. Most excellent work.
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Haha thanks! I’m really glad to see you enjoyed it, despite the idea being somewhat silly :)
Sometimes getting something new is the best option.
Yes they do, how else would they do their job selling their clothing.
Better do it before she gets upset sunset. I wouldn't want to see her upset. 😬
So that's the pants sunset was asked to try on, huh, I was expecting something different. 😕
Sure wasn't expecting to see the story end like this but sometimes these endings aren't that bad.
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Heh thats fair. Didnt have much time to write this one anyway so I went with a goofy ending :P
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Been there done that myself.
Sunset: These seem a little light, like wearing nothing at all...
Rarity (thinking): Stupid sexy Sunset...