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Pegasi will rule


Heya! I'm Nate, the fun loving Brony from CT! :D

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(Note: This is one of my older stories, before I became a bit better at writing. And I thank you all for getting this to the feature box. My life is complete. :3
Also, credit to whoever for the artwork. I loved it and had to use it. Love you XO)
Zoey, Louis and Francis are finally home free. After helping Ellis, Coach, Nick and Rochelle with the bridge, they're finally getting ready to set sail to calmer waters. But when a tropical storm sends them to a land of colorful, peaceful ponies, how will the group react? Will Zoey be able to accept her worlds fate, will Louis be as positive as can be? Will Frances HATE every goddamn thing? Did something else follow them in? Only time will tell in, LEFT 4 DEAD IN EQUESTRIA!!!

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Okay, so taking a teensie, tiny break from Halo. I decided, 'Eh, while I'm figuring s**t out for the Halo story, why not give Left 4 Dead a whirl?'

This is just for fun, so if things seem weird at points, just remember, I'm not even trying. Good reading everypony! :rainbowkiss::heart:

Hmm left 4 dead you say automatically amused, continue.

You can continue on with this story of yours :ajsmug:

Okay lets see where this road takes us. :unsuresweetie:

Hm...You get one Big Mac..and one DAH DAAH!.:eeyup: DAT ASS! DAH DAAH!

If they get ponified, :twilightangry2:.
Seriously though, I enjoyed this story's beginning, keep at it.

I want to see where this is going...

I r interested. This could be unbelievably good, or godawful. One suggestion, please make chapters longer. Readers will ignore a story if a chapter doesn't go past the two thousand mark. Otherwise, cool story bro. Favorited and liked.:rainbowwild::twilightsmile::ajsmug::yay::raritywink::pinkiehappy:

There is much potential in this story.:pinkiehappy: Dont buck it up.:twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

HAHAHAAHAHAH anything francis doesnt hate?

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lets hopw they are not ponys when they come to ponyvill and they have there guns

like the idea. one tip though with the start of each new person/pony talking create a new paragraph to improve the flow. :moustache:

Seems good. You may continue. :moustache:

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

EHRMAGERD!!! I will wait patiently for this :pinkiehappy:

havent even read it yet... but l4d + mlp = INSTA FAV!!!!!

Yay first!!!!!!!

Any way here's my thought......
A Bit of this:rainbowhuh:
A little bit of this:pinkiegasp:
But mostly this:twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

Great job but that's what I think

I'm squealing in class :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Please update soon!!!

Really glad you all like this. I wasn't even trying! :rainbowlaugh: You all da best and now I'll put my undivided attention into this story to make it the best it can be. :pinkiehappy::heart:

plz change the pic it is miss leading a good story needs a good pic :rainbowdetermined2:

She screamed and jumped back as something hit her hand from the other side. "H-hello?" She gasped.
Rainbow Dash has a hand?
"Oh my gosh, are you okay? What happ,,,,ened..."
Too many commas, not enough ellipses.
It was tall, had dark, brown skin, and now fur of mane.
... wat

Anyways, here's the valid, not-grammar-correction part of my comment.
How could the ones in the ocean be any worse than some of the ones on land?
Suddenly, movieshark attack. You know, the movieshark species? Never heard of it? I'm not surprised. It looks and functions just like a normal shark, with one key difference. It's always out for the blood of a fleshbag.

Ahhh. Your story is so awesome! And it made my early morning rage gone. Moar please.

This is boring hurry and create the story lazyass faster becuz i want to read more never rest til it end

Yeah, here's chapter 3. Been wicked busy with school, and I honestly am not having a good time. Sorry if these aren't the best, but being overtired and overworked makes Pegasi a dull boy...:pinkiecrazy:
Enjoy it, everypony! Next chapter we get to see Celestia solve their problem! :pinkiehappy:

You should try to update more often and I want them to get a defib and get Bill back

This story is awesome, I anticipate the next chapter. Excuse my Draconic language but, Bensvelk Apzen! :pinkiehappy:

You know I was about to groan that ‘the survivors’ seemed a little to accepting about the whole talking ponies thing. But then I thought about it. The fact they survived something that was considered fantasy even in there world (a zombie apocalypse) mightn’t help lessen the blow. Not to mention the fact they finally get a rest (that didn’t constitute spending maybe days locked in a small safe room) would be welcome, but the ability to actually talk with something after that time and stress whether that is human or fantasy creature.
I will say that it seems to be in danger of going by a little two quick. That mightn’t just be because the chapters are shorter then I’m used to, or because you just want to get the introductions ‘out of the way’ so ‘the action’ can begin. If the latter is the case then I would personally advise against it.

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

Hehehuehuehue. My anticipation is mounting :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

It's ok, but y'all need to slow the buck down.

Someone- if they get permission- should make a small not-story-canon chapter where this crosses over with that other one with Ellis.

YAY! SO MANY FEELS! :heart: I read the comic, but I wanted my own dialogue for the Sacrifice ending. :ajsmug: Deal with it! :raritywink:

You know seeing as now the survivors are aware they are carriers you would think they would be a bit reluctant to go wandering around. Especially since they know the infections spreads through mammals. Or they should warn them at least.

1316913 Then again the ponies aren't human though, and based on some of the animals in the namely the crows/birds seen in game, it wouldn't be a stretch to assume that ponies and the like are immune to the virus.

according to the desc. Zombies may be seen in this fic. i just hope that the first one won't be a tank-ified pony, or else the're all scrwed:raritycry::raritycry:
unless..... the ponies have a secret stockpile of grenade launchers:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNN! :rainbowdetermined2:
Princess Celestia's bet, new survivors, and one badass mother bucker named Loner. I can tell this is going to be fun for our innocent goddess of the sun. :rainbowkiss: Teehee! Enjoy this shit! Imma keep writing!

Well, this was unexpected, but I'm intrigued.
Also: "Aw sheit nigga!":rainbowlaugh:

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