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Princess Alicorn Sunset Shimmer(TM)

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Cozy Glow is released from her stone prison. Now she has to start down the long road of reformation, even if in a way she’s already begun that process while in exile. But at least she has a companion that understands what she’s been through. She’s still got a lot of apologies to make though. 

Written for the Cozy Glow Short Story Contest Written for the prompt: They’d set her free. They’d told her she deserved another chance. She didn’t know what being reformed meant, though, in a world where the heroes crushed the wrong-doers with overwhelming force.

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Simple but cute story. Interesting idea on what the rainbow did.

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That's what most people believe the Rainbow Wave did to Sunset, so I don't think it would be any different for Luna, Discord, or the Legion of Doom.

It was a cute and nice story, I really liked it.

This was very cute and I do like the idea of touching on a forgiveness story especially considering how young Cozy is. Plus I'll read just about anything with Sunset Shimmer in it. Much like Sunset, Cozy's road to redemption will be long and riddled with doubt. Thanks for writing this.

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definitely not. this was written for a contest I didn't win, and also I don't write for MLP anymore.

Day two hundred and seventy six inside her stone prison, and Cozy Glow felt the urge to cry from the third time that day. Well, mentally cry. She actually couldn’t do anything. She was simply a soul trapped inside her own mind, her only company being the voices of her once allies.

Dang almost a full year trapped in that prision, time sure flew by after they were defeated.

Cozy missed clouds. She missed flying through the sky with the weather ponies when she lived in Cloudsdale. Before Daddy kicked them out and they had to relocate to Ponyville. Before Mommy was killed and she was thrown into an orphanage. She missed soaring through the open skies without a care in the world.

How sad :fluttershysad:

“Well, we could accidentally release all three of them and cause all of Equestria to go into tyranny, or we could-” Twilight was cut off by the other mare lifting a hoof to her lips.

And they'd be blamed entirely for what they've caused.

Slowly, she raised her hoof. The pristine shoe on Sunset’s hoof wrapped around Cozy’s small, unpedicuried hoof. It felt nice to touch another pony for one. To have an ally. To feel affection. Cozy looked up at Sunset, letting a small smile grace her face.

Wait sunsets still a princess in this story???

“It’s a Cozy-sandwich!” Pinkie exclaimed, trying to brighten the mood.

lol

Cozy looked up, watching as the mostly retired princess of the night took a step towards her. Cozy backed up slightly, shaking as she tried not to show it. She hadn’t even thought she might come face to face with the retired royal, but supposed it made sense. Princess Twilight didn’t have the power to dreamwalk, and she had to sleep sometime.

Makes perfect sense when you think about it.



This story sure was better than i thought it would be.

hate it, not enough suffering and depression.

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I can't tell if this is /gen or /lh

I kind of feel bad for Cozy Glow, though she was a villain at the time

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