Cozy Glow learned that to get throu life she had 2 ways: manipulating her way to the top or running away. We all know how well turned out.
This story doesn't focuss on the events of the show but rather the where and how she learned her ways and what would become of the poor filly now turned into stone.
I submit this story to the Cozy Glow Short Story Contest
This is the first fanfiction i made well to be fair last month i tried to write another one, but a virus broke my computer and killed the fanfic while i had written just 2 chapters, i don't know if that counts i hope you guys like it.
any criticism would be appreciated, english is not my first language and i want to keep learning so anything on grammar and spelling would really help me.
Chapters (5)
Good work. I liked your story. Hopefully we will see more!
I like the concept of a schemer this is what makes me interested in this character a girl from nothing becomes something bigger than she was originally
Simple manipulation why am I not surprised good job
You can really feel her fear here
She must be careful a person that likes to manipulate people doesn't change easily
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true, if in a future i do a re-write or sequel or whatever maybe i would had her using her manipulation again.
spoiler about last chapter:
in the last chapter she do a small speech to make folk help with a little proyect, the idea was stablising that her little special talent was about convincing folk to do what she wants and cause great change by either argue her case or manipulation. but now i think it could had been handled better.
nooo! i want death! i want she to go down with determination and depression. like a beautiful flame.
This here is why i am pro reforming cozy
Yes she's evil
Yes she deserves being turned to stone
BUT NOT FOREVER!
she was still Young
And EVERY SINGLE PONY WAS ABLE TO BE REFORMED
EVERY ONE OF THEM
...looks at g5
Whoops
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Cozy: really?