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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Idea proposed by Latecomer with whom this is a collaboration. Takes place after "The One Where Pinkie Pie Knows". The Sex tag is for implications of sex but no actual sexual content.)

The news that Princess Cadence is having a baby came as a surprise to all but one mare, but now the secret is out and there's lots to discuss about it. Including the fact that Cadence is going to be a mom.

At a sleepover at Twilight's castle shortly after the big announcement, the girls all start to consider whether they might one day have families of their own. This kind of curiosity naturally gets them talking as each consider their own parental styles and restrictions or barriers to being a parent.

The resulting discussions may just reveal some things about themselves that the six mares have never known before. After all, no two mares approach the aspect of motherhood in quite the same way.

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The title brings back MythrilMoth memories.

10208324 Well, it wasn't really intentional. The title was the best I could think of. But you could consider it a bit of a nod to one of the many fics left uncompleted by his passing.

"I don't even want to think about that royal rubbish! "

He's not quiet rubbish. He saved Shining Armor's flank when Shining showed he was indeed related to Twilight by almost starting another war with the Yaks until Blueblood showed WHY he's a diplomat!

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I will, nice job SPB

Nicely done! I can imagine who that guard is Twilight mentioned.

But

Pinkie Pie chirped! "Well, she hatched him, didn't she? Doesn't that mean she kind of is his mom?"

Is the exclamation point on purpose? Just saying as it looks off

Still, I don't want to imagine Cadence's mood swings during her pregnancy. Or when she gave birth...I read a story once where Twilight was born and Shining's birth was described as

“I’m here Velvet,’ Night Light replied, just now entering the room. ‘Don’t worry, it will all be ri…’ That was as far as he got when, suddenly the equipment in the room was picked up with magic, and forcefully launched at him.

REALLY good job on this one-shot. Yeah, the exchanges and characterizations are well done in all the right places. ALL of them have made really good points (especially the ones who actually have younger siblings). And yeah, Pinkie has a point about how they ALL have quite a long time ahead of them before thinking about children (and, oddly enough, Pinkie was the first of the Mane Six to actually BECOME a mother, so it just goes to show that you never know).

I really like this. It makes a lot of sense and I can totally imagine that.

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In a comic that the show never once mentioned or hinted at. If it was show canon, I'd think somepony would have said something at some point about it.

10209366 The comics are secondary canon, meaning they're canon unless contradicted by the show.

Is this story in any way related to Just Girls Talking?

10211585 Not directly. It is, at best, an indirect nod to it.

This story came off wonderfully! All it would need is an opening that has Spike leaving and an ending of the girls waking the next day with 'clear minded' thoughts as to how they all now have more to think on for their futures beyond their current life goals. After all, most of them have already achieved many of their aspirations with Dashie and Fluttershy really being the only two yet to attain their full dreams. As Flutters had hers by Season 8 and Dash, I believe, in Season 6? (season 6 and 7 are rough for me to recall as they were when I was dealing with surgery-after-surgery and then life without sight)

This would make a wonderful 'Slice Of Life' episode if they were to ever make TV 14 episodes of the show. I can't imagine the TV 14 eps being more than having discussions, like this. It would actually be neat to see what Twi and pals get to when not in situations where they are limited to what they can discuss.

Great story by both you and Latecomer. You two work with each other. :)

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Side note is that, due to stress, I haven't been able to work on my prompt. However, if this week goes well, I should have it done by Friday. (I've been dealing with a lot of psychological stress from OL and RL sources lately)

10214426 Sorry to hear about the stress, that's never any fun to deal with.

Bet you Spike will be hitched with Gabby before they have a special someone later on.

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