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Oneshot crossover with Miraculous Ladybug.

During the events of Anon-A-Miss, Sunset decides to go through the portal and ends up in Paris of the world of Miraculous Ladybug. She gets adopted by the Dupain-Cheng family and decides to help out their daughter Marinette deal with bullies Chloe and Lila.

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Comments ( 14 )

It's nice but feels so rush even for a one shot.
this is more like a summary rather then a story. Sorry.

10008309
Thanks
Just wanted it done and I am not sure I could stretch it out anyway

I know this is a oneshot but do you think you could do more? From where I'm standing this seems like a story with great potential

10008315
Sorry this was all I think I can do

Other authors are welcome to expand on it

Yeah. I'm with Diablo on this. This is a summary, and a rushed one at that.

I... don't really know what to make of this.

Like several people have said, it seems more like a summery than an actual story.
It could'be used some dialogue between the various characters, imho.

Very disappointed in this, tbh.

Summary for me to, but it was still good.

WAIT I THINK I KNOW YOU! You made ml salt fics ao3 right?

Liked the premise, and while you heard it enough already...this reads more like a summary or outline as opposed to a story. I say outline cause it reads like you wrote this for yourself so you'd know how it would go from Sunset arriving in Paris to how she gets involved with Marinette, etc.

I liked the idea.
It's just too rushed like way way to rushed. Which is a shame this has a lot of potential to be a good story.

10010112
I'm working on an anon-a-miss and miraculous crossover. And yes Sunset will get Akumatized

I could see a sequel chapter where Sunset targets Hawkmoth and Gabriel as being the same person.

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