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Smashology


Welcome to my world, my mind and my own Wonderland. Writer, Analyst, Critic, Movie Buff, Gamer, Researcher, that's who I am.

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What if the Mane 7 were the days of the week? How would it feel to spend a week with them? For you, there will be chaos. For them there will be more chaos.

One girl per day.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 6 )

she is the best..wish i could be her.

Whoa! Rainbow, language!

It's Sunset. Sorry Rarity, Sunset is forever best girl.

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Agreed Sunset is indeed best girl lol

She why is she being so mean to me?

I was expecting some heartwarming fun with the girls, but the way Applejack is aggressive towards the reader ruins it. While the final chapter does shed some light on what appears to be happening, it still hasn't been explained well enough imo. There's potential here, but the chapters and story is too short to really shine. I get you just wanted a short fun story, but it really needed to be longer to flesh your ideas out and to better explain the girl's motivations. The only chapter I like was Rainbow's as it's what I wanted to read. Just some good nice fun.

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