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Welcome to my world, my mind and my own Wonderland. Writer, Analyst, Critic, Movie Buff, Gamer, Researcher, that's who I am.


It's Hearts and Hooves Day and everypony has a special somepony... except Spike. He feels so lonely that he does the ultimate sacrifice: sell his soul to Tirek just for a kiss from Rarity. But what began as a little problem will develop as a race against time to save him from the Lord of Tartarus, who happens to be the one they least suspect. Based on 'The Devil and Homer Simpson.'

Thanks to forestpip for the editing. You're the real hero here!

Cover art by ShutterflyEQD.

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Comments ( 11 )

I did laugh at Pinkie's task for Tirek. Just for that, have a moustache.:moustache:

Comment posted by DakariKingMykan deleted Mar 31st, 2016

Don't do it. Don't you dare do it. Don't even think about it. DON'T!


It was an interesting take on the Simpsons' story but it was a hard read. Your writing seemed so clunky and there wasn't a lot of detail in it. It felt really rushed. Personally, I ink this could have been expanded into 3 or four chapter story if there was more detail put into it. I hope I'm not sounding too harsh, but I'm just trying to help your writing improve so that it will be a more enjoyable story next time around.

Someone watched the simpsons...i know, trust me.

So I didn't like this. Let me explain why beside just saying it terrible and leaving into the site. I felt like the story it self never let me feel for the comedy itself. Plus the Pinkie is Tirek line got used far too much, writing a comedy story you need to have room to breath in, seeing how this isn't being shown to the people it has to be different form of comedy.

It just the line after line and it just felt like there was only one joke in the whole story that you just re-used over and over again. The random picture did pull me out of the story as well, but I wasn't stuck into the world you tried to created with the characters. It felt like this was a chore to read through and I didn't like it as much as I hoped.

It wasn't terrible or the worst thing in the world, for me it was bad and could have been much better, you had good ideas for the story I just feel like you didn't use those ideas.

“Honey, I’m home” the silence surrounded the place. “Oh, I forgot. I’m not married.”

Heading to the kitchen he found a letter from Twilight saying: “I went to the Crystal Empire today, Flash said that he’s keeping a surprise for me. Sorry to leave you alone today but love can’t wait. There’s a bowl with gems in case you’re hungry. Love you, Twilight.”

*Proceeds to go ballistic and destroy various foodstuffs*

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