Spike has always wanted to be a pony. It's a secret he as kept since his early childhood. After a fight with Rarity the little dragon says his wish aloud. And a certain chaotic being overhears and decides that Spike is need of a change. The best thing about it is there is no way Discord cannot enjoy the transformation.
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...woah...
Hmm.
Ok I have to know what is the woah and hmm. about.
Discord is the only anything that will give out free fedoras.
Cause fedoras are cool.
Also, nice chapter.
Edit: found this.
And I was just about to offer you a deal of a life time. Such a piety.
Pity?
Discord is the only creature cool enough to pass out fedoras. Thanks for the heads up about by piety pity mistake.
Oh god, you keep updating, and updating and updating. I want to sleep! D:
Nice story you have, but you need to slow down. I am seeing quite a few grammar mistakes.
I think I will slow down a little and fix what grammar mistakes I can find. Please if any of you spot a grammar mistake let me know. Oh and thanks for all the fav's and views I can't believe this actually got featured.
Again thanks for the support!
more!
I clicked the first chapter then I saw the sex tag and I baaaaaacked it up
I'm not so sure I want to read this now if it's implying what I think it is....
Sex tag is for innuendo only.
I like it so far and cant wait for more. No complaints if you want go back and fix the grammatical errors before proceeding. I'm more about how well a story is told and there wasn't anything I couldn't read past so it didn't disrupt the flow for me to much Excellent so far though.
3448221 amazement by the story and this story has possibilities in that order
its Blue, not blew
Pen name
"We have many residents who are looking for a roommate. Would you be ok with sharing a home with somepony else?"
3449928sleep, sleep is for the weak
MOAR.
Fluttershy demands it of you.
More incoming!
Interesting fic. Eager to see more.:D
3450700 you might want to remember to click the reply button. most of them will never read your reply otherwise.
Oh!
For some reason the line
made me laugh out loud.
The writing in the story is a bit clunky in places but the concept's promising and above all it's pretty fun! 
Also lovin' that Spike is secretly a writer that many ponies are fans of 
3451840 Oh!
Your command over the english language is mediocre at best. However, the quality of your storytelling is phenomenal. Its also interesting that though your grammer is lacking your imagery and vocabulary are also great. Thumbs and favs, hoping for more soon.
3452284 My grammar is absolutely deplorable but I do have a decent vocabulary. I wish I could trade vocab for grammar because I would like for my writing to be more grammaricly correct.
Thank you for you comment on my story telling ability. I try to tell a good story.
And more is on the way.
3452311 Fluttershy and Valiant moment?
Very nice! Could use a proof reader, but none of that kept this from being a pretty enjoyable read.
3452284
Language is a many headed beast never forget.
It's good, but can I proofread this? I found quite a few errors.
3452986 That would be great! How do we do this?
3452527 i honestly dont even remember writing that ima just delete it
The plot thickens
Aside from what I consider a little OOC behavior from AJ,
That was Amazing!
before i liked how discord was doing it but now that spike cant even end it by telling the others im starting to feel like discord is just an ass and he's one of my favorite characters
3453421 Of all the characters the only two I have a lot of trouble writing are Applejack and Pinkie Pie. You would think being a from the south as well as being raised on a farm I would be able to relate to AJ the most but nothing is further from the truth. And Pinkie is way to random and insightful. Love both of their characters but they are difficult for me to write.
3453425 Don't worry I've got a few things in store for Daddy Discord.
And even this is tame compared to some of the other ways he has been portrayed.
3453458
Eh, differences happen.
IMO, ur AJ is fine, just a little less blunt than normally portrayed. Her dynamic with dash is great tho.
And for Pinkie ... it seems people type a random pinkie line, then link it to some type of philosophy and work that around for a bit if she's giving advice...
Otherwise your on your own with pinkie.
I tried to read this. I really did, but there are so many fucking errors that made me grind my fucking teeth. I had to stop in the name of my dental health.
Get a goddamn editor, man. Jesus.
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I found some errors he can fix himself or run it through a word processor but not to the point he needs an editor.
i think it would waste an editors time reading this only to fix spelling errors. though he might need a pre reader before posting new chapters, besides that he has earned a fav and follow from me!
3453659
Typo, plus missing comma.
Another missing comma.
Another typo and missing comma.
Another missing comma plus too/to confusion.
Missing punctuation, plus dialogue rule confusion.
These are examples from the first few lines of only chapter three. These kinds of errors are persistent throughout the entire story.
In short; yes. He needs and editor.
Ehh... It's going too fast for my taste... A little build up to the transformation would have been nice, and adding an actual transformation sequence (like Princess and the Frog or Little Mermaid had) instead of just a scene change would have been excellent. Unfortunately, it's just really hard for me to enjoy this fic, but I will give it a C for effort...
3453726 You are right! I do need an editor. Either that or put some serous time into studying grammar and spelling. I'm trying to get a better hold of grammar with my little harbrace handbook but I have patience issues.
3453735 Moving a little fast eh? Eeyep another one of my problems. I either move too fast or too slow. I don't know which to do. Overall I believe this story deserves a re-write and I think I will...
Commas, man.
Eh, the gender swap seems alittle too 'dickish' (on discords part) for my tastes....but ah well, still good, just think that perhaps alittle more should have happened before the gender swap
Was pretty interested in this story before but this chapter lost me.
I think some people haven't read a fic like this. I have, but this one has a nice start
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