Twilight wants to turn her friends into stone, until she finds a way to make them immortal like herself.
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9981180
Hah! Monty python.
9981180
Glad to see them showing a little restraint😒
Jesus Christ.
9981216
You found the story creepy?
I’m kinda mixed on this, on one hand, I do like that Twilight wants to make them immortal, but on the other, I find it pretty extreme that they must be in stone in the meantime..
Someone give me an enormous banner of paper to cover this ugly stoner. LOL
I get Twilight wanting her friends to be there forever, and why not all of them want it. I might have even liked it if you had left it at that.
But this is nothing but Twilight not giving any fuck whatsoever about her friends anymore. This is all about her. Selfhish flankhole she is.
Pretty sure Discord wouldn’t have let this happen to Fluttershy
9981217
A little, but More like heartbreaking. Is it supposed to be heartbreaking?
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Yeah, some of her friends might of agree to to do so. But I don't think the 'real' Twilight would do this to her friends. Note, the comedy tag.
9981244
Yeah, I bet if he finds out he would be mad.
9981254
Black comedy perhaps.
Anyone who takes this to seriously has clearly never read a bendy fic before
Yeah, it could have used a long ass monologue to explain where Twilight comes from. This as it is is nowhere close to relatable or understandable on twilight’s part.
9981254
Don't take this the wrong way, but using the "comedy" tag as an excuse for a character to act extremely OOC seems like a misuse of the tag.
Honestly, I think you might've been better off just stripping away the comedy elements and making this a pure darkfic.
To be honest, this hardly seems comedic, more ooc.
To me, it fails to be so over-the-top it's funny
While I applaud your attempt at dealing with a real issue, the story is far too short to really show any reason why we deal with so many issues in so little time. :P
An A for effort, a D for execution :)
I honestly forgot it was meant to be a comedy until I read the comments. I think structure wise, the story needs a bit of work. Comedy is one of the hardest genres to write about, but once you plan and time everything correctly, it comes out fine.
Also, as another tip, try reading other dark comedies (doesn’t have to be on this site) to get a feel for how they work. Hope this helps a bit
I'm confused. Why would she turn her friend to stone.
I think I smell a... WARNING: BADASS TWILIGHT!
i think i call this the dark version of remembrance xD
And a week later she unpetrifies them after gluing horns and/wings to them.
Discord was highly amused.
Honestly, I cant blame her for doing this. Being immortal and only getting to share time with barely a handful of other immortals would suck, alot. Especially if you dont have the choice to just off yourself as an immortal or have others there for you.
Twilight does realize she f*cked herself over, right?
There's been a bunch of fics dealing with terminally ill ponies which utterly overlook this as a potential solution. Waking up decades later in a largely unfamiliar world might not be much fun, but I would imagine it's usually preferable to a slow and painful death.
As to whether Twilight's friends would want this: Applejack and Fluttershy seem like the type that would likely be inclined to let nature take its course. Rainbow Dash and Rarity might be on board (they'd likely be more opposed to growing old than actually dying, depending on if they believe in any sort of afterlife). Pinkie Pie... hard to say.