When an immortal loves a mortal, there comes a day when they must inevitably part ways.
It's never easy having to say goodbye, but you'll always have the memories you made along the way.
Pre-Read by: I-A-M, Uria, SunnyDays
Submitted for the Sunset Shipping Contest: Endings
To anyone who has lost someone, I hope that their memories bring you happiness. Continue to live for them, and make every day a better one.
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Good night, sweet princess. Taste the Tequila Sunrise.
I don't think I have ever cared less about Aria than when she was rattling off a list of all her old husbands and how they were in bed.
Props for a good choice of characters, but this really didn't do much of anything for me. The cover is pretty, tho. I like the little wrinkly bits on Sunset's arm a lot. I hope the judges like the story more than I did.
Nice reference to Linkin Park's 'Shadow of the Day'
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I can't help but think that if that's all you took away from the conversation, the one Sunset asked about, that you really missed the point lol
To each their own though. Glad you enjoyed the cover at least!
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What's that suppose to mean?
Yowch, right in the feels. Immortality may seem so wonderful, but it can lead to such pain too. Rest well Sunset, your memory will live on through your Aria and her love for you. And that will be your immortality.
Interesting that, even without their gems, the sirens maintained their immortality.
All the same, good story.
I was doing so, so well.
But then
And I broke
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xrJSUVFxNXs
Sad but heartlifting. Nice nods to your Aria Archives Ask Blog
I'm not crying, you're crying
Ok, talking seriously now, this story is simply beautiful, sad but beautiful. Made me remember that even when our loved ones have to leave us, they will always be with us while we remember them.
Ffffffffuuuuuckkkkkkkk. This hurt my feelings a little bit....but like, in SUCH a good way. God, this was amazingly bittersweet.
This was much towards the sweeter side than I thought.
this story was good kudos and good job
Very, VERY well done. I usually very much dislike sunset x any siren stories, mainly because they aren't well done.
But this?
Perfection.
The tears were real, the joy was real... Even the memories felt real.
Well done.