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Pinkie Pie is being tormented by horrific nightmares. Unable to deal with it by herself anymore she seeks out Twilight's help, but will it have been the best decision when she finds herself alone in an abandoned, fog filled Ponyville?

Sequel: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4676/Too-Shy-for-a-Rainbow

There have been a LOT of high-quality readings of Silent Ponyville, but this one is my personal favorite:

Chapters (12)
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Site Owner

Think you might have forgotten to publish chapter 10.


no, I made a mistake with it. All the chapters are there, just for some reason (probably due to the site being in beta) chapter 10 was skipped, but Chapter 11 IS chapter 10.

Site Owner


Oh right, you mean because you accidently named it wrong and I haven't added the ability to rename chapters yet :P My apologies.

:derpytongue2: Lol I love the Sam ending. And I was freaked out with the ending where evil pinkie pie came into the real world.

:twilightblush: good game

Wow. This...this is beautiful, this here. I'm not familiar with the Silent Hill game, but it didn't stop my enjoyment of this story. This was dark, this was dramatic, and in the end it was very, very emotional...the explanation of the importance of Grammy's lesson to Pinkie was brilliant, and the fact that you were able to actually make something worthwhile out of the Cupcakes story is a feat in and of itself.

Normally, I find that bloody and grim stories just feel all wrong when mixed with ponies, but this one worked for me for some reason. Maybe it's just that the writing is really good, maybe the flow feels appropriate, I'm not sure what it is, but it works.

By the way, love the alternate ending with Sam. Hey, it wouldn't be Pinkie without some fourth wall demolition, would it? :pinkiecrazy:

By any chance, could you write another? i need my fill of silent hill because of you:twilightangry2: but your a good writer so i forgive you :pinkiehappy: also, ive read the second one about Fluttershy:fluttershysad: and i thought it was frickin amazing! :pinkiecrazy: but now we need one about apple Jack, or Rarity.

I enjoyed this story, it had an interesting concept given that the otherworld was actually Pinkie Pie's dementia, but I can't comment on how similar it was to the first Silent Hill game since I haven't had the pleasure of playing it yet. My only critique would be that there were too many repeated words and in some places, poor sentence structure. It also felt in some parts too much like a game rather than an actual story, which, while very much like pinkie pie does take away from of the tale's atmosphere. I'll be sure to read the second one with fluttershy too :yay:


I remember playing all the Silent Hill games... just... they never had this impact on me. This is entirely different... [god I'm crying again.]
I salute you sir! :rainbowdetermined2:
I cried a lot, but I enjoyed it... Thank you. [I'm back to tears again :(]


sorry try again next time :trollestia:

this is the ending i wanted, althought i feel i would have been better if you had written out the part where pinkie describes what happened to there sister. you missed a chance to show octy's reaction to finding out what really happened to her sisters

but non the less i felt it was good

ps i came here from a live narration of this story by some guy whos name begins with an a on youtube

you can thank him


almost like a cop out

this makes cupcakes make ALOT more sense

thank you

well.... THAT WAS ..... :unsuresweetie: no wors for how great was. i loved it :heart:

esspically the second pinkie pie and stanger danger twist:twistnerd::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

If, by any accident you're polish, check this translation of Silent Ponyville.

PINKIE! The fourth wall is sensitive! You can't just waltz on into the real world like that, it's baaaaad! Very bad!
Anywho, I love your story. Although Octavia being Pinkie's sister was a bit... :pinkiehappy: random...I think it just adds to your story's flair. You thought of it first, so this is your idea and your fanon that goes with it!
*manly tears*I would have killed the Slenderpony/Slendermane myself if I could have. If I ever get my hands on the colt I'll...I'll...*shattering glass* :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: heheheh!

And now, I sign off!
Godspeed you magnificent bastard-BlazingShadowBrony

I finally got around reading this. I just finished the first chapter, and OMG, it's even better than I could ever imagine.

May I ask a question, just to be sure? ; The dream Pinkie has about her and Rainbow Dash,
is that a reference to Cupcakes?

I'm so glad I finally have the time to read this. This deserves alot more views.
Oh and, you must feel so proud that this is being made into a game! I can't wait for it!
I have been playing SH ever since I was a little girl, and ponies are my life. This has got to be the best combo ever!

Now if you'll excuse me, I'll go read the next chapter right away!

Hmm... This was... Interesting

I may try to make a flash game out of this if I have free time

Wow......That was awesome....along with me hearing ost tracks from Silent hill it gave me a feeling of paranoia which in other words you did just great.

This was pure amazing.

Whenever at the end when Pinkie realized Slendermane was the colt, and that everything was inside her head, I was like "DUDHCYIDBGUVFIDSBGDV'



pf-ft blazingshadow i go through the fourth wall all the time..........and thats why i created the doctor to clean up my mess......and i usually accedintaly make 1 sentint life form go insane every time i cross....i should probably stop going through it........either way i love this chapter hahaha she broke the fourth wall

Oh my, so Pinkie's been sent to a dark world! You'd think it would be Fluttershy that would be sent to a place like that, but you chose the happiest pony to torture. I must also applaud for using Cupcakes as one of the nightmares.

Thia is amazing, it had me reading straight through!
Good job Pony!

Ah! I wish i could help in the game making. But, Alas. The only thing im good for is talking. Oh it`d be fun to voice a character. But my voice is to deep to be anyone`s... And also id be Shy and shaky reading the scripts :twilightsheepish:


At first i was like :rainbowkiss: but then i was like :pinkiegasp:

At first i was like :rainbowkiss: but then i was like :pinkiegasp:

Wow, that was... just wow....:pinkiegasp:

I was never a Silent Hill fan, but this Fanfic was awesome.:pinkiesad2:
Well your story also got me to continue reading since noon and its night right now so, good job man.:rainbowlaugh:

Awesome, best ending so far...
This is what I was looking for since the first ending
Good job tho, hope to see more of your work :pinkiehappy:

I really like these, they give depth to the characters and make them more... real (for lack of a better term)
Anyway good job jake, looking forward to the next chapter in story 3

Lol filleydelpia:rainbowlaugh:

I'm thinking Bellimina died and this caused by repressed memory or something
Time for next chapter! :pinkiecrazy:

I am glad I took the time to read this, it was amazing. :pinkiesad2:

Manly tears where shed :fluttercry:

Wait... Top hat and cane dancing Pyramid Head? :pinkiehappy: That is so win!

Wait...so is this a "Silent Hill" crossover or a "Slender Man" crossover?

Glad to see my first not-cupcake story here. Still one of my absolute favorites because THIS is how you do a crossover right. I mean the concepts of Silent Hill are there, but it still has an original twist to them. And obviously, major points have been earned for no gratuitous Pyramid Head appearance (Save for the joke ending, but that's what they're for.) All my stars belong to this (and Fallout: Equestria, and On a Cross and Arrow, and Past Sins.)

I don't even like grim-dark, but wow, this is one of the best fictions of all time. You, my good sir, are brilliant, although I'm a little afraid to read Silent Ponyville 2.

It's very rare for a story to actually scare me, but you managed to pull it off. When I first caught eye of this story I was literally bouncing up and down just to read it. I mean- I'm a biiiig silent hill fan. I'm also a big fan of Pinkie Pie, so it was just exciting to see something like this. :yay:

*reads first comment* yea ok... 10th chapter... WAIT! *reads name then scrolls down to bottom of page

*bows down*

Kk now that i got that out of me, it was a great story. I cant wait to read the next one. I saw the second one on the featured list, so i decided to read the first one first. Im glad i did. I liked all the extra endings you put in there :pinkiehappy: i remember how disturbing the movie was, and this had me thinking about it the whole time. Five stars for you. (god im horrible at writing. My sentences just are horrible, and even tho this barely influences my sentence structure, it doesnt help that im typing on my ipod)

Also, i rated 5 stars, but it went from 4.8 to 4.7... Like what? I dont even.... :rainbowhuh:


what in the name of... :derpyderp1:

D'aaaww Pinkie feels sympathy for the little monster-zombie-child. That kind of innocence is why ponies would die in a zombie apocalypse.:rainbowhuh:

Silent Hill and Fatal Frame scare me crapless, and I love every second.:pinkiecrazy:

OOOO! Idea Idea!! Fatal Frame ponies Fatal Frame ponies!!!! It must be done!:yay:

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