After hearing about what a jerk Gilda was to her friends, Rainbow Dash gives her an ultimatum: "Make friends, or we're through."
But could she really have anything in common with a such a wimpy, dweebish pony like Fluttershy?
This was written for GaPJaxie's second Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Competition. Though I admit to going back and doing some editing and expansion afterward since I couldn't quite finish it in time.
And thanks to Syke Jr and FlashGen for a post-contest pre-publish spot check!
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The real question is, who won the fight?
......an in the EQG world? Fluttershy reveals her love of pro wrestling to a human Gilda.
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...The new Alpha, who else?
Glad to see this moved over from the competition. The way that the two of them bond feels ripped right out of the show.
Awesome! Nice bonding activity.
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Ah, but was it the one Gilda cheered for?
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I mean, pro wrestling is just soap opera but with more getting hit by chairs. And Flutters knows it’s fake, and has her goth side...
This feels incomplete. So she's friends with Fluttershy, why care about RD? RD turned on Gilda and threw their friendship away because she wouldn't let Pinkie antagonize her. Yes Gilda yelled at Fluttershy, but that doesn't make Gilda evil or justify siding with the pony who tried to drive her and RD apart.
.....Ok.
I understand about how Gilda’s personality kind of went neutral and boring after her quote unquote redemption, but this was a little too far in the other direction for me personally.
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I think I see where you're coming from, but in my defense, it was a speed writing competition. There was only an hour to write as much as possible (not counting a little post-story editing). Even I didn't really know for sure where the story was going until it got there.
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Eh, I don't hold it against you. Its more the episode itself I dislike, never sat right with me that it never got settled properly.
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Nature documentaries are violent as hell at times. I imagine if would fill a similar roll.