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Hardships serve to reveal true friends and expose false ones. True friends are not bound by convenience, rather by the ability to stick together and pick each-other back up when times are rough, even if the two "friends" barely know each other.

This is the lesson Fluttershy learned the first time she met Rainbow Dash, back when the cyan pegasus stood up for her against the most popular filly in Cloudsdale Flight School. A time when Fluttershy's own "friends" didn't stand up for her.

This is the story about how Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, two fillies with radically different personalities, became friends.

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Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 29 )

Great story! Always liked those good ol' school drama shit. No typos no nothing...dude you're catching on.

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Thanks :pinkiehappy: (how did you get those emoticons anyway?)

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Awesome haha. I'm always worried about that. Glad I'm improving :twilightsmile:

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Glad you enjoyed it :yay:

Man, it's always the good stories that go unnoticed.

I like this story. I really do! But there's one catch:

"She would spend her nights locked in her room, her eyes staring out the window as Luna's moon shone its light across her tear-streaked face."

Luna was still stuck on the moon during the Mane Six's foalhoods. It doesn't make much sense - perhaps trying not to be super specific here will be just as effective if not more. :twilightsheepish:

Overall though, terrific story :raritywink:

A pretty heart-warming short story! Always nice to see the bullies getting put in their place. :raritystarry:

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Indeed it is lol. Thanks, I appreciate that you went all the way back in my stories history to read this :pinkiehappy:

This is my opinion, the best Fluttershy story on here.

Aww, this was adorable. Great job. :twilightsmile:

Hhmmm... good, so far. Lets see where it goes from here.

Now I really hate Hail Blitz even more!

Comment posted by zombie king24 deleted Apr 18th, 2013

Aaaw thats sweet. I wish I could finish reading this but I gotta go to sleep. I has "Big Test" tomorrow.

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Good luck and thanks for all of the comments and the fave :twilightsmile:

Hmmm... short. But it was good nice work. Also where did Gilda get this MP3 from because I'm sure they shouldn't have it. O-well I'm not the author so I guess it doesn't matter.

Very nice little story. First two chapters seemed a little exposition-heavy (show, don't tell), but I'm glad you gave Fluttershy a chance to be more outgoing as a filly and you write Rainbow Dash well, too.
Cheers! :yay:

I kind of want to snap her neck, but that's mostly bad memories resurfacing... Middle schoolers are the worst stage of human growth cycle, and apparently ponies too.

Wish this would have happened to me, oh well it made me a tougher I guess.

Hail Blitz, I'll be waiting for you to do something bad to Fluttershy...:trixieshiftleft:

I hope Rainbow Dash gives Hail Blitz a world of hurt. :twilightangry2:

By the way, I'll be commenting on all chapters of this story, because it's already one of my favorites! :pinkiehappy:

Oh...I was hoping Hail Blitz would get in trouble by a teacher or the principal...:ajsleepy:

But still, this story was a perfect example of Rainbow Dash's loyalty. I'm glad she gave Flutters a chance! :yay::rainbowwild:

This became instantly as one of my favourites fic :):rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

Really cute fiction! I could totally see that happening.:yay:

"A true, true friend helps a friend in need
A friend will be there to help you see
A true, true friend helps a friend in need
To see the light that shines from a true, true friend!"

"Would you try, just give it a chance
You might find that you'll start to understand."

Adorable pegasi cuteness!

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