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Rao the Red Sun

Master of procrastination and occasional writer of pony stories.


After waking to a grim surprise, Luna spends the evening preparing a fitting gift for a friend.

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Talk about incredible prose. It got me curious about what Luna was doing with each of the tokens that she received from each of the ponies she visited, and it's great to see how her magic made that work to create something beautiful.

The dreams match up to each character, and I could tell that at least a couple of them matched to the situation (if they all did, I must have missed it), which by the way, I enjoy how you didn't outright say it, that the implications are enough for the audience to get it. I applaud your work, good sir! :pinkiehappy:

Also, thanks for satisfying my CheesePie cravings with Cheese's scene.

Each dream was meant to be in response to the situation, yes. Dash freaking out because there's a huge problem that she can't solve, and Rarity because she's suddenly missing something enormously precious. Fluttershy and Cheese, on the opposite side of the spectrum, go to their happy places, after a fashion, knowing that the last thing Pinkie would ever want is for somepony to be sad on her behalf.

I'm glad the implication wasn't too subtle. I'm also quite happy you liked Cheese's part. I wasn't sure about including him at first, but in the end I think it was the right call.

Thanks for stopping by!

You gave me a feel, dammit.

Thanks for writing this.

because scenes are like this are too precious

I always stumble to make symbolism clear enough in my writing, but you did an excellent job here. This was a nice read. :pinkiesmile:

Thanks :D And I fixed the extra word. Can't believe what weird things get passed me sometimes.

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