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Bronyxy


Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork

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Everypony remembers the ‘Best Young Flyer’ competition.  The white unicorn with the butterfly wings and the sonic rainboom.

What is not so well known is that Rarity also had the most beautiful thoroughbred white alicorn wings for a fleeting moment in time.  Nopony would have ever believed her, and she probably would not have believed it herself were it not for a very special photograph hanging on the wall of her boudoir.

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Oh, wow. A very interesting tale, spun from the smallest of animation errors. Absolutely wonderful.

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Thanks for the kind words. I tried to stay as true as possible to the existing storyline, and this just kind of fits.

Nice story! I didn't notice that! :ajsmug:

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Thanks for your support. Once I saw it, I couldn't resist fitting a story round it!

I love the more unique ideas that pop up. This was fun and fresh.

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Thank you for your kind words. I was aware of the animation error and wanted to use it to create a backstory that kept faith with the series. You really have no idea how many times I watched that episode to ensure I got it right!
It was a lot of fun to write, although I did treat Pinkie pretty harshly - I will have to make it up to her in some future story!

Comment posted by Peppermint Frost deleted Aug 16th, 2017

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My story is based around the events happening in Season 4 Episode 12 - "Pinkie Pride".
If you scan through the dance scene near the end frame at a time in high definition you will see it.

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