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A Gellar Field malfunction casts 800 Pre-Heresy Word Bearers into the immaterium just after the Fall of Monarchia.
When they return 10,000 years later, they are forever changed.
Gone are the fanatical worshipers of the Emperor, for in their place stand not the heralds of Chaos, but the Heretics of Harmony.

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Sounds like an actual codex, very nicely done.

Oh Emperor, I have fallen into temptation. I here by renounce the shakles of the Imperium and shall seek a better route. One of harmony.

So unless you say otherwise I know what my Astres army is going to be now, though the may be a successor chapter.

In these heady days of the 41st Millenium I wonder what Guilleman would make of these warriors?

And I wonder if there are Fallen amongst them that might bring the Dark Angel's hunting. Or Cypher.

Interesting, very interesting. I would love to know what special rules all these cults would have. Good luck outrunning the Inquisition

Delicious Heresy.

I LOVED this! If you ever want to write more about these amazing word bearers but need assistance in any manner please let me know.

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Hey, if you want to use them for your own stories, go right ahead.
Also, feel free to check out my currently ongoing fic: Lost Loyalty, which is also MLP40K.

I find myself quite liking this!

Investigations revealed that another detachment of the Cult of Laughter had been surrounded by the Orks, and that worked in conjunction with their fellows...without reliable communications...on two different planets.

When you can literally hear the interviewers sanity fracturing.

Beware the Crusade.

For they will bring forth.

The Crusaders. :scootangel:

Will you continue this?

hrm. I actually like this, especially the starting point being Word Bearers right after the events on Monarchia. pretty detailed on their interactions as well.

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Gellar Field fuckups isn't used nearly as often as it should be.
Who else is tired of 'their legion of origin is unknown'?

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Maybe later on in the future. For now, my currently ongoing fic is titled Lost Loyalty (it's also an MLP40K story)
If you want to use them for your own story, feel free.

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heh, ye did ask that already. considering the oddities of the warp, its a shame its rarely used. to be fair, they'd have to let it be known in order for such a thing to get out. that said, its quite likely such things have happened.

Tides of the warp and all...

The Tree has born it's Fruit.

Someone at Hasbro is a 40K fan because The Tree of Harmony is pretty much point for point exactly what The Tree of Life was described as.

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I honestly did not even know there was a Tree of life in Warhammer 40k until you said that.

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Yeah, and it would be even more awesome if a ‘fic was made in the actual layout of a Codex (or at least very reminiscent of it) that legitimately expanded upon this! Like unit composition, beliefs, how they view ponies (and vice-versa), and so on.

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Props for you, Brother/Sister (whichever you identify as)! Welcome to the Rainbow Side!
Also, I hope that Astartes Army of yours goes well.

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Most likely with a combination of RESPECT(!) (for maintaining at least a spark of a shadow of a fragment of his father’s dreams for Humanity), confusion (who da ‘eck worships the Concept of Harmony anyways?), wariness (they aren’t exactly entirely predictable, especially the Cult of Laughter’s Psykers and Sorcerers) and other emotions of a similar vein.
And if there are Fallen among their numbers, then chances are that they’d be all too willing too shoot themselves in front of the Dark Angels’ Interrogator-Chaplains after repenting, to ‘[…] Save [them] the ammunition.’

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Yeah, I’d also like to know what those rules would be, as well as any unique psychic powers/rituals they had.
I also hope you outrun the Inquisition, SuperSaiyanDiclonius. Say what you will about them, they are sure as flack a stubborn and persistent lot. If you can’t, just stage a Geller Field failure and pray to Almighty Faust Above that you don’t get killed by the Dæmons, Warp Energies, Deep Space or anything else along those lines.

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Oh, Faust No!

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Same here! Though I’m thinking that maaaaayyyyyy be a subtle reference to Isha. Who knows? I sure as f*#k don’t.

The Eye within the Eye has opened.

The Tree has born it's Fruit.

And the Mare spreads it's wings to calm the Raging Storm.

Amicitia Magia Est.

Okay, this is interesting! I wonder what it could mean...

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The prophecy refers to the spirit of Harmony, my head-canon for merging MLP and Warhammer 40k is that Equestria exits within the Eye of the Storm (the Warp) and that the Spirit of Harmony is the Shadow of the Dark Gods (the emotions they ignore)

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Huh. Interesting. You do realise that that pretty much means that the ponies and their fellow creatures are basically dæmons with stable material forms, right? Also, if I somehow found myself in that version of the Warp, Nomaad-Style, I’d try to ally with Harmony as soon as possible.

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I am aware, if you want, you can read my currently ongoing fanfic Lost Loyalty (also MLP40K) to learn more of my head canon for Equestria in the 41st millennium.

This is awesome and very well writen
... I wonder in Pip would join if given the option

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Your welcome to use these characters in your own fanfic if you want.

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Okay, I think I’ll give it a try.

I wholeheartedly concur with Iida Tenya's sentiment. But to your awesome chapter/warband.

These guys have now become one of my top favorite homebrewed space marine chapters. Hands down.

I already loved your Lost Loyalty story, but this is just taking it to the next level.

And the best part is the fact that the way you've had the story of them be, it could actually work within the universe.

You keep it up, giving them more lore and backstory and maybe a few named characters, and you'd easily be able to send it in to 40k Theories or some other 40k YouTubers who make videos based on 40k homebrewed stuff.

You deserve it with this kind of great chapter.

And I've seen quite a few kind of strange homebrews on 40k Theories' Homebrews of the Week.


I was working on my own main homebrewed space marine chapter, although it's become more of a whole sector's worth of stuff by this point.

But I was going to have them reach other and befriend several particular other space marine chapters, such as the Black Dragons, Salamanders, and a few fan made ones, just to reference other people's awesome. But now I'm thinking I want to have them interact with your chapter now.



Though I think the only thing you should change is their name.

Not that it's a bad name, I just think it would fit more as what the Inquisition and other parts of the Imperium has labeled them as, and it's not their official chapter name.

I think their official name could be the Heralds of Harmony.

But I feel like I'm just being stupidly nit picky about that.

Lehm me be honest here, the nature of this chapter is just over the top dumb and that is why I love it. They are deploying ridiculously unorthodox and crazy tactics (like their own Ork Waaaagh, switching troops on different planets, outdancing Harlequins) and then they do crazy things like inviting the Inquisition or swapping belief systems with the Tau. Honestly, the absolute madness from them doesn’t even seem unlikely, it fits in Warhammer really good.

Also, with their effect on the Tau being the sessecion of half the local forces, I wager they could get a big part of the Tau empire on their side and then conquer the other. Maybe the Imperium will then start talking with them, find a peace treaty?
(Maybe they could help with healing big E, under conditions of course)

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That's what I was going for.

Brilliant my good sir.

Good show on the new supplemental update of this interesting new universe. I'm honestly curious in where you go from here.

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Sorry for the confusion. I guess I must have been mistaken thinking this was an expansion of Daemon world Equestria. Good short story nonetheless.

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Lol, sorry but no. This is just a homebrew I did.

If Daemon World Equestria does get a continuation, it'll be in GMBlackJack's League of Sweetie Belles. You should check it out.

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thanks for the offer but I highly doubt it. I prefer original works from the original artist / authors. Don't get me wrong your work's are new and interesting but somebody building on your small world doesn't interest me I'm sorry but no. I don't mean to come off as hypercritical I really don't but I've read a lot of fanfiction and Fimfiction. So no offense unless you actually type up a conclusion or a continuation of that microverse. Thanks but no thanks no offense to the expanding author but that's just not my cup of warp juice.

I read this again and I'm giving you another thumbs up.:twilightsheepish:👍

Man, I love this chapter. Easily my favorite homebrew, and not just because pony. I'm honestly tempted to paint these guys.

Sweet Emperor, that was horrible. I need a Chaplain. And I'm not sure if Chief Apothecary can save you from the dugs you've been taking. :pinkiehappy:

o be surrounded by a fleet of Salamanders, who respected the traitors after the incident

Grudging respect or not, duty is still duty and a traitor is still a traitor.

Removing mental programmings and restoring lost memories, giving the transhuman warriors mortal minds once again.

Undoing someone's entire upbringing and life experience is totally not brainwashing... :trollestia:

Malachi observed the Cult Leaders using Arcane artifacts called The Elements of Harmony to Disillusion and Purify a squad of Death Guard Plague Marines.

:pinkiesick:

the men who clawed away any pieces of their skin marked with the star of Chaos, crying out for the forgiveness of the innocents they murdered in the name of their masters, they truly were disillusioned

Right... Just because somepony wanted them to. :twilightoops:

he and his Cult have taken up the unorthodox solution of 'Ork Farming' to sate their bloodlust.

Nothing speaks 'sanity' like having your spaceship contaminated by alien spores.

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It's not like it doesn't fit the setting. You can't out-crazy 40k.

Well, well, well, well, well! if it isn't a member of old man Commissar's Imperial Guard! How's it going?

Me? Oh, just remembering the fact I am technically an Inquisitor in spite of being a genetor Magos of high standing...and that my brain was put inside the very thick of a bullgryn by a drukhari.

But enough about my convoluted totally-original-OC's backstory!

Let's talk about this little gem of a "story".

I like it. And the excuse reason you provide for chosing the Word bearers is definitely good enough to overlook the fact they'd just slaughter the ponies rather than bothering to communicate with them, much less befriend them.

Lastly and in conclusion, I'm gonna look into your other works. If this fic is any indicator, I'll most likely enjoy your other work.

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Well met. Glad to see I'm not the only member of the Boss' entourage that visits this site.

Every few months I reread this, is fantastic

Makes you wonder what happens when the Mechanics/Dark Mechanicus as well as the Iron Hands meet the Heretics.

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