This is my first time making a displaced/self-insert fanfic.
What happens when Yami the dark goddess herself asks you if you want to be overpowered as all fucking hell and the chance to troll the multiverse? What happens when you say yes? Well read on and see what the fuck happens.
rate t for swearing and drug abused applied, reference of cancer and alcohol abused so if you do not want to read about them I will be giving a heads up to what chapters will have a reference to drug abused and cancer.
the main crossovers will be with Naruto, Bleach, Dragon ball z, My little pony, Fallout, and some other amines/tv-shows/games
Cover art is done by me and is a picture of the main character jenny.
I will try to have one or more chapters a mouth but know I am bad with timing so I make no promise.
Spelling and grammar errors everywhere in the description, afraid to read story because of it.
X_X The grammar, the spelling! Oh lord...
I'll read it, but the word coloring is not night-mode friendly.
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...You might wanna read a few of the displaced stories that have made overpowered characters work.
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I'm sorry, but what did I just witness?
Grammar needs some work.
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I have and I did my best with what I wanted to do.
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what parts do I need to work on. it well help me fix what is wrong.
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then take it off and read it in the light. (I am not try to sound rude I am just saying this.)
I think this is a parody. If not, say it is a parody. Because if this is your honest-to-goodness best attempt at writing... holy shit, son.
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kind of, I take a bit of someone else story but add my own twist there is little of it. and I know I am a bad writer that is why I make stories for others to read so that they could tell me what to work on and fix.
this story looks fun!
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Thanks, I try my best to make stories everyone can read and enjoy.
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you're welcome
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Yes but for somepeople light mode is to bright.
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maybe put it on High contrast-dark(or some other color that works), I am just trying to help and so if that does not work then I will try to from that works.
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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still working on chapter 2 just live and me being a bit lazy so maybe a week or two.
Its fine take your time just please dont cancel this fic
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I don't plan on it. and thanks.
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So absolutely none of them? The day a OP as fuck displaced character is actually done right, is the day this fandom is dead to me.
Interesting, baring the bad grammar (which is understandable as you’re still new to writing), the story is pretty interesting. Though I’m not sure why she would’ve gone to hell, what could she have done that would cause that after death. If I was in her shoes, I would have gone with the Biju (she’d have way more chakra and could have used the transformation jutsu so she could walk around like any human. And not to mention that out of all her abilities, chakra would be the most effective at trolling people, Naruto can attest to that). Though I guess her choices would be the most effective for an OP character, not at the start though.
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I am planning on adding a biju later on in the story these powers are just the start of them.
get tired of waiting for 'equestrias greatest warrior' to update?
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Yup, how do you like my version so far?
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Not bad. Could use some editing, but I'm liking it so far
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Thanks and I will do my best with the editing part but I can't promise anything.
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No worries. I've seen worse
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yea i seen some horrible writing/typing to. And thanks.
An anti-material rifle? Interesting choice. Since she has Aquamarine, does that mean she’ll grow wings?
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Eyup, and Fun fact about my self I love sniper rifles and that one is one of my top 3 favorite rifle.
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What’s the other two?
Sofar the only complaint/criticism i have is how short the chapters are. Beyond that it seems like it has the potential to be a good if not great story
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Thanks, and sorry but I like to try have my chapters at 1k words.
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No worries. Its just a personal preference thing. I myself like to read so big long chapters just suit me
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Ok, and i just wanted to say that.
.....I'd have added Majin.
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maybe later but I don't want to have them to be to overpowered.
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....Then WHY IS IT IN THE TITLE?????!!!!!
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I mean I am having them work to become op and I am taking it slowly at first, besides I have some of the story already planned and I might add you idea after I finish what I have planned.
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.....Alright.
HYA Mate its 1:07 so a bit urm just do not give this up keep at it and do not die from the pleg
URGU
I HATE IN SOMANIEA!
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it's not died, I am just lazy at times and I like to work on it little at a time.
Update?
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Working on it, just really lazy right now.
Great chapter uwu
There were some typos in the chapter like chakra and you typed
2 times
Not gonna lie, was hoping one of them would have said "believe it". Could you imagine how adorable it would have been if Hinata had said "believe it" at least once in the show?
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Thanks I will get to that at some point when I am not in a lazy mood.
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You will see in do time and I kick my lazy asshole self into gear.
Proof read please proof read