overpowered troll

by jen_lee_hattie

happy x-mas/new year

Jenny (P.O.V)

"Hello Lei how are you, mom, and dad doing?" I asked my sis over the phone

"I am good, mom and dad are still trying to get me to take them back home but you know why we can't." Lei siad.

"Yeah but still I miss all of you, but that is not here or there I am calling to tell you and Mom and Dad happy Xmas and New year. I siad

Ok, happy Xmas and new year to you to sis. Lei siaded and hang up her phone.

Author's Note:

Hey everyone sorry for this being posted later then I siad last chapter, my laptop was a bitch and did not want to work so I am using my tablet and RL is a bitch and some people have given me shit that they them fucking self's could easily do and with that mini rant and sorry for the short chapter could not think of anything else to type, and with that done with, bye into next chapter.

Comments

[link4]

get tired of waiting for 'equestrias greatest warrior' to update?

[jen_lee_hattie]

10037924
Yup, how do you like my version so far?

[link4]

10038293
Not bad. Could use some editing, but I'm liking it so far

[jen_lee_hattie]

10038549
Thanks and I will do my best with the editing part but I can't promise anything.

[link4]

10038553
No worries. I've seen worse

[jen_lee_hattie]

10038556
yea i seen some horrible writing/typing to. And thanks.

[vortex123]

10039160
What’s the other two?

[Willdragoon]

Sofar the only complaint/criticism i have is how short the chapters are. Beyond that it seems like it has the potential to be a good if not great story

[jen_lee_hattie]

10069331
Thanks, and sorry but I like to try have my chapters at 1k words.

[Willdragoon]

10069416
No worries. Its just a personal preference thing. I myself like to read so big long chapters just suit me

[jen_lee_hattie]

10069441
Ok, and i just wanted to say that.

[LEGION55]

10098282
....Then WHY IS IT IN THE TITLE?????!!!!!

[jen_lee_hattie]

10098286
I mean I am having them work to become op and I am taking it slowly at first, besides I have some of the story already planned and I might add you idea after I finish what I have planned.

[LEGION55]

10098302
.....Alright.

[King of Kingdoms of God]

HYA Mate its 1:07 so a bit urm just do not give this up keep at it and do not die from the pleg

URGU
I HATE IN SOMANIEA!

[jen_lee_hattie]

10141756
it's not died, I am just lazy at times and I like to work on it little at a time.

[Nebulous Draco]

Update?

[jen_lee_hattie]

10156771
Working on it, just really lazy right now.