2773448 I'm already at around chapter 50-60 and i may say daaanm son π€£ this is one of the best stories I've read all month. You have done a great job in this story and i hope you may keep doing what you do.π For me it has most if not all parts of a great story from the drama to gore to the giggling pinkie moments and action. The only thing i see just lacking is out of the 95%-98% it just needs a 2% of more how do i sayπ ππππ moments if you know what that means to keep a sence of romance from forming.π π π but all in all awsome work and hope you do great and keep the story going ππππ€
2773297 Well a lot of things right now im at around chapter 30 and i like the story so far nothing bad to say, a litle sad that one of the sisters died (angle) but nice choice. i don't know if youl let A.P. tell celli and luna that he was their former master/king i thnk that would be to funny but time will tellππ keep doing what your doing and have funπ€π. And when i first saw the story i saw it had 1 million words and 3 years so i had to see your dedication it was a realy good story π€π
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No prob hope you do wellππ€πβ
Thanks to add the strongest swordmaster at your favorites. I hope you have enjoyed every chapter of it. XD
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I'm already at around chapter 50-60 and i may say daaanm son π€£ this is one of the best stories I've read all month. You have done a great job in this story and i hope you may keep doing what you do.π For me it has most if not all parts of a great story from the drama to gore to the giggling pinkie moments and action. The only thing i see just lacking is out of the 95%-98% it just needs a 2% of more how do i sayπ ππππ moments if you know what that means to keep a sence of romance from forming.π π π but all in all awsome work and hope you do great and keep the story going ππππ€
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Well a lot of things right now im at around chapter 30 and i like the story so far nothing bad to say, a litle sad that one of the sisters died (angle) but nice choice. i don't know if youl let A.P. tell celli and luna that he was their former master/king i thnk that would be to funny but time will tellππ keep doing what your doing and have funπ€π. And when i first saw the story i saw it had 1 million words and 3 years so i had to see your dedication it was a realy good story π€π
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