• Member Since 14th Apr, 2019
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VParadox


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No prob hope you do wellπŸ˜πŸ€˜πŸ‘βœŒ

Thanks to add the strongest swordmaster at your favorites. I hope you have enjoyed every chapter of it. XD

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I'm already at around chapter 50-60 and i may say daaanm son 🀣 this is one of the best stories I've read all month. You have done a great job in this story and i hope you may keep doing what you do.😁 For me it has most if not all parts of a great story from the drama to gore to the giggling pinkie moments and action. The only thing i see just lacking is out of the 95%-98% it just needs a 2% of more how do i sayπŸ˜… πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ moments if you know what that means to keep a sence of romance from forming.πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… but all in all awsome work and hope you do great and keep the story going πŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜€πŸ€˜

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Well a lot of things right now im at around chapter 30 and i like the story so far nothing bad to say, a litle sad that one of the sisters died (angle) but nice choice. i don't know if youl let A.P. tell celli and luna that he was their former master/king i thnk that would be to funny but time will tellπŸ˜πŸ˜€ keep doing what your doing and have funπŸ€˜πŸ˜€. And when i first saw the story i saw it had 1 million words and 3 years so i had to see your dedication it was a realy good story πŸ€˜πŸ˜€

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