Tale of the Tail

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IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #1 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Hmm... Now where have I seen that cover art before?

Oh. Dat ASS...

Penalt

Penalt #2 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Eyup. I was looking around for a good cover image, saw that and went, "Oh, that's perfect.."

IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #3 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · · ·

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Nice.

avidreader07

avidreader07 #4 · Jun 4th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Huh. This Spicy Hot fellow you mention, he wouldn't happen to be a night-pony, would he?

By the way, fun story. Would definitely not say no to more chapters, or a sequel, or whatever form the continuation might take.

Penalt

Penalt #5 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

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Just maybe.

I did ask if I could borrow the character from Damaged, and he said yes.

avidreader07

avidreader07 #6 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

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Honestly, after reading, before I submitted that comment, I decided to double-check your list of stories, to make sure you weren't the author of SBPS. Then I had to double-check my tracking list, to make sure it hadn't been removed, for some reason. I would have been so embarrassed if I'd posted that comment, then found out you were referencing yourself. I almost did that once.

Solid Punch

Solid Punch #7 · Jun 29th, 2019 · · ·

Hope you'll make sequel to it... Maybe with Twilight butt-plugged? Sexy science ensues! And maybe she could modify the creature to do more interesting things, but reproduce only when given special signal...

Also, one question. It has been several weeks. How did Fluttershy (or butt-creature) deal with pooping? If Flutters didn't eat that whole time, she'd starve to death before the story started. How that problem was dealt with?

Penalt

Penalt #8 · Jun 29th, 2019 · · ·

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With the overall positive reaction this definitely goes into the "Write more when I get a chance" pile. Sequel will be Rarity getting... er... stuffed and mounted, followed by a double-team seduction of Twilight.

As for the what happened to the poop. The creature consumed it, and used it to fuel its own particular brand of magic. Such as shaping and animating its tail, the production and broadcast of pheromones and it firing hormones into Fluttershy via her colon. You can thank Damaged for the interesting bit of trivia that the colon easily absorbs liquids and chemicals.

Solid Punch