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Welcome friends and fellows to a little poke into The Bridle Path world, as seen from a slightly different angle, at a different time.

This is set well after the events of The Bridle Path, and I have shown this to the author of such (of course) to ensure nothing collides. It is just a good friend trying to help somepony they really care for, in their own special way. Pinkie Pie is very good at throwing parties, but this could just be her best ever!

I have left this marked incomplete, I don't actually know why, I certainly don't plan to add more to it now, but I am keeping my options open. This is not on any regular release schedules.

Thank you, Damaged, for this very special gift. I've come a long way since I wrote those first words of my first story that is The Bridle Path. A very large part of that growth has been due to you. Your friendship, your mentorship, the continual nudges to improve. Never overly pushy, just friendly nudges in the right directions. Your Discord chat where I have been able to exchange ideas and concepts with others.

I would not be anywhere close to the level I am at if it had not of been for you. I will treasure this gift for a long time to come.

:trollestia: What price did you say?
:moustache: You heard right.
:twilightoops: You bought what?
:pinkiegasp: More like who!
:moustache: I may be greedy but I'm not stupid!
:facehoof: He sold my castle?
:raritystarry: mister master :moustache: I get all the mares
:duck: more like all the mares get you

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7857981 am I the only one that winced at the tongue being sewn?

7858051 Nope...fully wincing here as well.

7858051 You should of seen me wince when I drew it...:facehoof:

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:duck: (Valiente) Spike you really know us... we shall reward you
:raritystarry: Spikey never hurt yourself on our account!
:duck: (V) But he's so so...
:raritycry: He's mine!
:duck: (V) innocent , I want him!
:raritystarry: Oh NO !
:raritystarry: (V) Oh yes!
:twilightsheepish: Why's Rarity rolling on the dirt?
:moustache: Beats me I think they're fighting over me...
:twilightoops: Wut?
:pinkiehappy: What if it's a tie?
:facehoof:

My, this is good, and it'd almost be fun to see a sequel. The price negotiation, and then the two of them learning their roles, yes, there's quite a bit to be told there.

7876460 There have been talks about such, but in the interest of keeping close to Penalt's canon, I would not have any of the negotiations until after his present series is complete. The reasons are going to become obvious, I am playing with two (technically three) of his main-characters here, and I intend to play nice. :pinkiehappy:

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Ah, now that's a very good reason to wait. I remember you replied to one of the comments that this was complete but you were leaving the door open to a continuation, hence my suggestion. It definitely makes sense to wait and see where it all falls.

One dessert that doesn't spoil one's appetite, I guess... :pinkiehappy:

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