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OverlyAgro


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This story is a sequel to Twilight takes over Equestria with paperwork


Chrysalis tries to get revenge the legal way. She has to fight for legal supremacy against the Princess of Friendship.

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I knew I shouldn't have dropped the LSD...

Add random tag if there is, because you are legally obligated to it

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Thank you, if I did it any later I would have gotten slapped according to the 'Author mistakes law' of 543.

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"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!" The author screamed, as he got dragged to Tartarus.

I'm just giving this a like for the authors notes

I have no idea what I just read.

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"Thanks!" Shouted the author all the way from Tartarus.
"Shut up!" Screamed Tirek "No one wants to listen to you plotting your way out of Tartarus using a legal loophole involving the rightful owner ship of candy canes! That would never work!"
"You'd be surprised."

To paraphrase Billy Madison,

Mr. OverlyAgro, what you’ve just written is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever read. At no point in your rambling, incoherent story were you even close to anything that could be considered an amusing plot. Everyone on this site is now dumber for having seen it. I award you one downvote, and may God have mercy on your soul.

I won't question anything anymore. This is Madness, and down the path lies insanity.

A path, it seems, that has already been tread by the author. :derpytongue2:


As for all this legal nonsense, should I ever find myself in a court in this Equestria, I'll immediately endeavour to hire Legal Basis from the Your Money other Your Life series.

If I recall correctly, when Chrysalis made him sign a contract of High Treason (he was working for the Crystal Empire), he did. With Chrysalis as the betrayed. And that's why you should always check the terms and conditions.

Oh, and he's also a Tax Collector.

EYour Money or Your Life
When mugged, it is good to encounter a professional. And Princess Cadance is lucky to... meet a true expert?
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"Twilight?"

"Yes Starlight?"

"How does the Equestrian legal system work?"

"It doesn't."

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"Objection! As Tartarus is a protectorate of Equestria, Equestrian laws apply here. As such, the author's defense would work!"

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I needed more after this. *drops another gallon*

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I have now read this, and it's great.
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Don't worry, I'll be out of Tartarus once my paperwork applying for my candy cane PhD gets approved.

"Is anypony even slightly sane anymore?" Starlight questioned.

Nope. And we are happy about that.

Anyway, brilliant ideas in this story!
Good Work!

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You'll like its sequels as well, then. :pinkiesmile:

"But he's dead! AND WHY AREN'T WE BLASTING HER!" Starlight added.

Um continuity error...
Also great story

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Can't you just pick it up? :pinkiehappy:

Objections nethet of thr judges are legal. They don’t have thr licenses Rhat also illegal. XD

"But he's (she's) dead! AND WHY AREN'T WE BLASTING HER!" Starlight added.

Chrysalis laid down her final judgement. "You will be striped (stripped) of all titles and be tortured eternally in Tartarus. Do you have any last words?"

But he's dead

She.

What the fucking fuck? *dies laughing*

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“He” refers to Sombra, and “she” is Chrysalis

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Using pronouns to refer to two different nouns in one sentence is grammatically correct but can be confusing.

For instance, if Applejack was fighting Rarity and I said "She hit her" it is unclear what is happening. But "She hit Rarity" or "Rarity hit her", it is immediately apparent what is going on.

Thus, I recommend replacing one of the pronouns with a noun

Comment posted by SWEETOLEBOB18 deleted Apr 24th, 2020

This is...
Yes.
Yeses. All of them.
All the yeses. Everywhere, for all time.
YES.

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