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MythrilMoth


LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

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On a lawless desert planet, an outlaw wanders the wastelands, cursed to forever be on the move, as entire towns are destroyed when ponies try to collect the bounty of sixty billion bits being offered for the Equine Typhoon...

This is the story of Dash the Stampede.

(The cover art still needs to be 20% cooler.)

("My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic" is the intellectual property of Hasbro. "Trigun" is the intellectual property of Yasuhiro Nightow.)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 51 )

Plot has potential. Needs a good proof read though. One of the best (and funnest) ways to proof read is to get a friend, put it on Gdocs, and go through it together at the same time. Not only will you cover it in twice the speed and sincerity, but you'll enjoy doing it :)

1039789 I'm assuming by your "needs a good proofread" remark you're referring to the fact that it says "iles" instead of "miles" in several places? This is intentional. "iles" is the unit of measurement used for distance in Trigun.

This has been proofread several times by myself and others with similar levels of technical expertise. I don't generally post stories until I've weeded them thoroughly.

I do appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment. :)

Ponies? My Favorite Anime of all time? Epic pun of names?

Reading now.

Ok, appoligies. I didn't know this as I havn't read Trigun before.
Like the story though ;)

What anime/manga is this a crossover with? I would like to read it before i try finishing this.

As for the story itself, it is good, plot has potentional and the ponies seems cool enough with big guns, i am awaiting more.

1039881 The crossover is with Trigun. Familiarity with Trigun is not necessary to read Skygun, although it helps. I'm doing my best to establish the world-setting in such a way that you don't really need to know Trigun for this.

That having been said, totally go watch Trigun. Netflix has it and it's also on Youtube. :twilightsmile:

That was SO! AWESOME! :rainbowkiss: Poor Twilight absolutely fits the role of stoic and disbelieving Meryl, and Pinkie is awesome as Millie. :facehoof: :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see the others show up!

I like the start you have here, but I feel I must warn you against the chief pitfall of crossovers like this:

You haven't told a new story.

This is the first episode of Trigun, with pony puns. If you aren't changing anything, then anyone who's seen Trigun doesn't really need to keep reading, and anyone who hasn't likely won't get it (like the commenter who thought 'iles' was a typo.)

1039988 All I can say at this point is, wait for it.

1039926 great, i dont have to watch a whole anime to undertand wtf is going on. tho i will do it because of recommendation from a seemingly awesome author.

any idea when the next chapter will be out?

any idea when the next chapter will be out?

ProTip: I absolutely hate being asked this.

The answer is always, ALWAYS, "when it's done." I do not write on a timetable.

That having been said, work on chapter 2 is progressing VERY quickly, so it's possible it'll be posted tonight.

Holy CRAP that's awesome. I may have to ask the uploader if they'd mind reversioning this for Skygun...

Thanks for sharing that, it rocked!

funny that i should find a trigun crossover when i just finished watching it

I was seriously thinking about re-watching Trigun but reading this...Everything is better with ponies.:pinkiehappy:

First Trigun crossover I've run into. :pinkiehappy:

Niiice! Excellent tie-in of idol-worship of Wonderbolts! >w< And Flim/Flam's song routine was PRICELESS. This is way more than just a name-replace; I love that you actually think about which ponies would really fit best in the role. SO EXCITE to see Derpy, too, though I almost would have thought it would have been Berry Punch. XD But then that'd probably be too close to the actual episode to be as interesting as Derpy. :3

1048827 Thanks! :twilightsmile: And yes, I'm putting a lot of thought into which ponies to insert into which roles. This will lead to episodes that play out COMPLETELY differently than what you might expect...which is of course the whole point and fun of this.

And yeah, deciding who to use for Frank Marlon was a tough call. Derpy's chapter is going to be...interesting.

completely worth the time spent reading, derpy will make awsomeness happen! great story, you thought this out well and flim, flam being greedy like in mlp and dash bookin it after what fleetfoot said. great character placement, keepd up, will make this all the worthwhile reading the next chapters. great work again, keep the awsomeness coming! :rainbowkiss:

Drunk Derpy?

:pinkiehappy: COUNT ME IN!

Oh noooes, Dinky! :applecry: I mean you could see it was coming but all the same... Pinkie, will you ever stop making baked bads? :pinkiesick: Derpy was extra adorable though - it's almost too bad she's a one-off character. Can't wait for the next bit, but take your time, of course! ^_^

Yaay~! :yay: :rainbowdetermined2: Poor Dash. All she wants are pancakes.

"...like Hell's own cavalry..."


Ummm...don't you mean like TARTARUS'S own cavalry?

"A few more iles, Pinkie."

The first line from Twilight Sparkle is a blatant typo.:facehoof:

3164402 You know, I'm really sick of people thinking that's a typo when it isn't. And since you've actually SEEN Trigun, you should know better. :facehoof:

"Who, me? Oh, I'm nopony special. Just the most radically awesome pony you'll ever meet..."

Rainbow Dash doesn't really have the humility to keep Vash's reputation under raps, does she?:twistnerd:

I believe that Wolfwood should be Fluttershy

3573250 You can believe whatever you want, I'm the one holding the whip. :moustache:

So, is this thing still being written? Because it is loads of fun to read.

Also, it's criminally underviewed, especially considering it's linked in the FAQ...

3833927 Yeah, I'm going to be getting back to this fairly soon. (By "fairly soon" I mean "possibly before March"). There are reasons it stalled in the first place, and then reasons it continued to stall, but more IS coming. :twilightblush:

3834460
Glad to hear it's still in development! I am no stranger to keeping a flexible writing schedule, so I kinda know that feel.

Your puns are killing me. :rainbowlaugh:

3164402
"iles" is the unit of distance used in the anime. It's not a typo.

Mythril. By the goddesses why do I only discover these things AFTER I should?:derpyderp2:

Curse people and their not telling me of awesome stuff. Old stuff, but by the gods it's me!:rainbowwild:

Definitely didn't come up with my name from this, it was my avatar that did it. Of course, you could always have Applewood:
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I'm enamored with this now. So many name drops, so little swelling of ego

If you're not going to finish this story, then you should set it to "cancelled".

5185831 I'm going to finish it, it's just going to be a while because I'm busy with other stuff. I'm planning to get back to it around December.

Also, strike one. :ajbemused:

I love the fact that Angel is playing the role of Kuroneko.

"East, I reckon,"

Oh really, now. Interesting...

5818245 I know exactly where you're going with that. I had not even heard of Austraeoh back when I was writing this. :derpytongue2:

5818278
Hehe, I see references when there are none. Have you read it, then?

BTW, excellent story. Makes me really want to re watch Trigun.

5818409 I've read Austraeoh, but it took me a LOOOOOONG time, and I'm only about 17 or so chapters into Eljunbyro. I'm trying to read at least five chapters a day. It'll take me a long time to get through all of it.

(Also, knowing Imploding Colon is SS&E makes me regret some of the things I've said about SS&E in the past... >.<;;)

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