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Some Leech


I...I am a monument to all your sins...

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That's good!!

great story. I enjoyed reading it

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Thanks y'all! I wanted to end it on a somewhat uplifting and "wholesome" note.

WARNING!!! "Wholesome" in the statement above is completely subjective and does not accurately reflect the material of this story. :trollestia:

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Eh. I like your stories. DOn't have to be wholesome to be good

Wait wait wait marriage with the vows basically being the mare bearing a foal? Holy eff H A W T

Well, this was a nice conclusion to a great series of story, good job on that, keep it up.

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Ain't that a delicious angle?!?

This is super hawt, but I am constantly haunted by the knowledge that this all started with Twilight raping her brother.

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It was more of a, "Hey, I know he wants it, but he's too chicken to ask for it. So, being a good sister, I'm gonna tease it out of him with magic!

But seriously, I wouldn't consider anything in this series non-con! Reluctant, "I don't know why I want this, but I do!"-con, at worst! :trollestia:

This entire series needs its own Hall of Fame.

God i wish that were me.

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It's not about what he "wants". It's about consent. And using the arcane equivalent of a love potion removes any possibility of consent being present.

It's like if you and your partner both want to have sex, but your partner is too nervous to initiate it. So you slip them a roofie and have your way with them because "Hey, it's alright! They totally wanted it!"

Like, I realize this is just fetish fuel, and I shouldn't take it this seriously, but it's a major gripe with this genre as a whole.

Congratulations, you made hate Gleaming Shield even more. And I'm not joking.

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I'm curious why?

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Because she literally just turn Shining into a mare for nothing then sex, I'm not a fan of that at all. Doesn't help that Glemeing is my least favorite r63 pony for that very reason.

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Well, personally I think there was a lot leading up to her transformation in previous fics. Admittedly, it was basically a sissification/feminisation story with a happier end then most - lacking the typical 'I'm just gonna become a cock hungry slut for the rest of my days' ending that most carry - and I'm contented with the end of this tale. And - I know the excuse is run down at this point - but this is a clop fiction first and foremost. The inherent point is for sex and nothing but sex and thus, there isn't much more reason for the transformation occur than for just sex. However, I suppose if you wanted, this could be read as the most sexually motivated story of finding oneself there is. I suppose if the author wanted, to satisfy you, they could do an epilogue of Shining happily living as a mare and a mother, showing it wasn't purely motivated by sex? But I dunno. Also, I kinda concur with you there. Gleaming is my least favourite r63 character and by far the most overdone. However, there's very little you could actually do with her in terms of story. R63, as a thing, exists - at least so I think - to facilitate porn. I don't know what you could do with it, beside do retelling of the same stores/episodes just with a genderbent cast, as there is not much in the episodes themselves that are reliant on their sexes. I suppose you could create original stories with r63'd ponies, but why? How does changing their sex make them any different aside from how they look? You could, I suppose, drastically change their characters. But then aren't they just new characters wearing the skin of pre-existing characters? But blah! I'm ranting.

Anywho, thanks for telling me your reasons.

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Glemeing Shield seems to be the one that use the most of these type of stories, and that is were my problems are coming from.

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In retrospect, I should have worded it differently. In my head, it was a spell designed to remove inhibitions; sort of like a modified version of the "Want-it-need-it" incantation. For what it's worth, I could have done a better job with describing it. :fluttershbad:

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The first two stories had much, much more.

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That wouldn't change anything. It's not possible for anyone to give consent while under the influence of mind-altering substances. That's why alcohol is considered the #1 most common date rape drug.

i wonder how chrysalis will take this little wrinkel....or NMM for that matter
*giggles picturing dick girl twilight screwing NMM into submision* forget the elements this is more fun!

......I hate myself for liking this. Am I weird because I have a TINY little rape/incest fetish?

Maybe you can make a sequel where one or two characters die and then Gleaming has sex with their dead bodies? Totally not ashamed of my necrophilia fetish.

This is a very good series
Wish there was a sequel to this particular story

I believe this could've been even better if Gleaming got to be a dickmare too, not for the actual use but to always remember where he came from.

Still hot as hell and it makes me a little sad to know it's over. Good story Leech, good story :twilightsmile:

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Just think about another story with her, a little later down the line. Heavy with foal, leaking a bit, and extraordinarily randy for a big, steamy helping of love!!! Man, I bet she'd be all about that! :yay:

Where this wasn't hot, it was cute. Well done.

To be honest, I already forgot what the visit's motive was in the last chapter, and by that I mean the fact of changing ones gender. I love the relation cadence and shining have in this one. One thing I expected was night light to appear in one of these, I expected him to be the special pony. I never was good at guessing characters, like antagonists for example. I have a proposition for a position or for foture use I guess: in the scene before twilight's climax I oh so expected celestia to just walk over twilight, pressing her belly into the filly she filled gleaming even more with her stuff... you know. Also a question to you: is it weird to have people comment and compliment fetish clopfics in the coments, is it weird to write back to them? While I still remembered this story (because I totally forgot about it until this chapter came out) I was silently hoping that you'd continue his adventures. Great job, lately I am pleased with your work even more than usually. It is too late to say merry christmas so I will limit myselt to say happy new year!

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First of all, noone is perfect and everyone has their fetishes. I belive some are worse than your (at least more eww) . Second, there is no second I just started the first sentence this was and was too lazy to rewrite it.

It just occured to me. I have to ask if it is hard to find necrophilia clop?

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So dont read this I guess. Noone is forcing you to and spoiler kinks are there for people who doesnt like them, or did you just wanted to share your opinion

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clopfics in the coments

Are we talking about the author or the act of leaving a comment on my work? :yay:

But seriously, it's fun as hell to get comments from y'all. Good, bad, ugly, they're all interesting to me. I mean, hell, even the shit talking can be fun. Also, merry belated christmas to you, as well!!!

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I meant commenting your work

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To answer your question, nah. I mean, it really doesn't bother me to address comments about lewd BS or anything. Hell, I find it extremely complimentary that people actually get off to, or simply enjoy, my work!

Also, random side note, you're the second person who thought the Somepony was going to be Night Light! :trollestia:

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I didn't find that person in the comments

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No no, it was someone on Discord! XD

I love Rule 63 when its logical in the story.

good story, keep up the good work, :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I'll sure as hell try! :raritywink:

Gods, Gleamy is so my idol here. I wish magical transition existed in real life.

That was beautiful read.

Is this the conclusion to the saga? These kinds of stories usually end with marriage.

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Aye, it is.

There may be some small spinoff or something later, but this completes the saga.

Lovely futa story indeed

Maybe getting them married like that was a little quick. You shouldn't have gone so far, just have Gleaming get used to her new body. It would have been hot if he were to try and seduce some of the stallions or be a combination of nervous and excited to show off her change.

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I found a new gif I like.

Shining Armor was no longer a he at all.

the snow white unicorn replied, giving the alicorn a bow.

had wrapped her lips around one of her sister’s nipples,

taking a step around the larger alicorn to peek at the sapphire maned pony,

just the cheerful and understanding sparkle she’d fallen for so long ago.

With an alicorn present, and their feelings for one another in full force,

Edit 6/8/2019:

Obediently, they all complied.

Edit 6/9/2019:

Gleaming gasped, as her entrance expanded to accommodate Cadance’s throbbing marecock.

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